American TV: I'm in Modern Family, and My Coworkers Call Me Jackal

The title of the book gave me the feeling that the protagonist and Jackal are a gay couple.

It was exhausting to read, especially the so-called interview at the end of each chapter, which looked like a script. What kind of person would think that readers on a novel website are here to read a script? It's so fragmented, it's like using AI to turn a TV series into a novel. It's just for fun.

It's more suitable for Quentin. You can send this book as a script. It's boring nonsense mixed with action scenes. If you add beautiful feet, Quentin will definitely be able to climax...

The writing is too boring, and the dialogue is too grand and embarrassing. I have no desire to watch it.

I was confused at the beginning! ! There was no introduction, just a lot of names, and no one knew who they were. Why are you writing a book for the King of Hell?

Hesitating and hesitating. He's not decisive at all, doesn't know what he's doing, and talks about things every day. Inexplicable contradictions, inexplicable problems. Take a group photo and recommend a job. If you want to take a group photo, then push the job. There is nothing to hesitate about. If you want a family, it's okay if you give up on this project. It's not like you haven't made money in the past, so the author can take your AI away. If you can't write it, don't write it. I always feel like I've eaten shit. Reading this novel makes me uncomfortable.

AI writing, AI tastes too strong

It's very interesting to see a series that is dedicated to Modern Family. The problem is that the setting of a family drama and a killer really don't match well. It would be good to continue writing a series based on a family drama. I would try to minimize the setting of going to Europe and the Suicide Squad scenes. I basically skipped watching them because It really doesn't match up and is too disconnected. The author's description of the Morgan family characters is quite distinctive, but it highlights Phil's family too much and is a bit too deliberate. It can be a small masterpiece after slowly blending in. The main reason is that the audience rate of these dramas is really not high at the beginning. Family dramas do not have too many conflict plots.

It's okay, relatively new. But you should make a distinction between daily life and combat. You, the author, cannot have both. Your current writing style cannot achieve that, and it looks very fragmented.

It feels a bit stiff, and I just can't blend in.