Two Worlds: From Failed Foundation Establishment to Immortality!

It's really nonsense to talk about cultivating immortals and selling products through live streaming. The essence of cultivating immortals is to understand the rules, evolve yourself, cultivate your mind and nature to better understand the Tao, and you also have to race against time and fight for your life, and you have to deal with cause and effect. How can you become an immortal by doing these worldly things?

The plot is too slow. There are various branches, either this enemy or that enemy. Either this one is in trouble or that one is in trouble. Such a good subject matter, such a good plug-in. I really think this plug-in is very good. Using the ancestor's account, you can pretend to be the ancestor, gain strength, and even show off in other worlds. Or you can follow your idea and get free skills and knowledge in the live broadcast room, and then crush the indigenous cultivators. What's the result? You keep dragging out various subplots, wearing down the readers' patience. It would be better if you had some foreshadowing before, but there is no foreshadowing at all. You come up to introduce you out of nowhere, and you are in trouble with who has a feud with whom. The sense of substitution is very poor. Then I thought that if you hurriedly ran to other small countries, you could secretly upgrade, improve your cultivation, and then pretend to be cool, and then it would be great. The plot ended up dragging on for several chapters. In the past life, it was written that he had trouble with the two women on the spaceship, and then it was written that the people from the sect traveled thousands of miles to catch up to find trouble. Because of the so-called little face, the enemy chased the protagonist from the sect to a small country, and wrote various branch plots, and wrote various branch plots that had no interesting meaning. The whole story is not about you and this person. If I have trouble, I have trouble with that person. I have written several chapters. I have not yet arrived in the small country, and I have not yet written about the refreshing feeling of developing secretly. I insist on writing various branch lines and various introductions. I have trouble with this person and trouble with that person. Couldn't you let the protagonist go to a small place as early as possible? Then he can survive in a small place, obtain powerful skills from the live broadcast room, and his strength will increase by leaps and bounds. , Others don't know that the protagonist's cultivation has improved by leaps and bounds, and this feeling is particularly good. Then you meet these two women again, and then surprise these two women with your cultivation. Then you meet Zeng Yang, this sect disciple who has been chasing trouble for thousands of miles, and then the other party is surprised by the protagonist's cultivation, and then is killed by the protagonist. How uncomfortable is this? It just so happens that you haven't felt comfortable yet, and you haven't felt like you have a sense of agency yet, so I introduced the background inexplicably, introduced the two women who had a grudge against the protagonist, and introduced this disciple who came to have a grudge against the protagonist for no apparent reason. The whole story is just about introducing these. Hey, I finally endured Chapter 1, Chapter 2. This chapter feels aggrieved, and then the next ten chapters have a good sense of substitution, and the feeling is refreshing. It can be highlighted very well, and there is a little bit of novelty and innovation. Then I just expect the protagonist to go to a small place to secretly develop and develop cheats. As a result, in the last three or four chapters, the style has suddenly changed, and it has returned to being aggrieved and refreshing. It's hard to explain in just one sentence. I introduced this and that, and didn't develop cheats or improve the protagonist's cultivation level. I watched it a few days ago when you updated it, but now I have no desire to click in. No matter what the author thinks of my evaluation, this is my true opinion.

Foundation building failed and I got a plug-in. Now in chapter 60, I can't even see the sign of rebuilding the foundation. Isn't this rhythm a bit wrong?

I saw several book recommendations in one day.

You don't need to read the first chapter to know that this is not a brainless piece of writing, right? A lot of people give it good reviews?

The background is grand, the logic of the large framework is sound, and the writing is quite good. The Cultivation of Immortality Alliance has made Cultivation of Immortality universal, scientific, and academic. From what we can see so far, it can be regarded as an excellent one among the scientific Cultivation of Immortality. I know that there are many things to consider in order to reflect the scientific development model of modern society to the cultivation of immortality, because before I read the novels "I'm a Mortal and I'm Scientifically Cultivating Immortality" and "Magic World Travel", I also imagined a world of scientific cultivation with a materialistic world view, but I was too lazy. So I understand the author very well. I think the author really doesn't have time to refine those small problems. For example, the orphan and widowed mother left behind by the reincarnation of the immortal lives in a thatched roof house and is said to have a good family. At the same time, she collects rent of fifteen spiritual stones a month and has to go to the mountains to collect firewood. And the protagonist's forty years of practicing Qi seems to only have a few hundred spiritual stones in his savings. Looking back, this kind of book with excellent settings usually has a bad plot, but this book is okay, there is no bloody plot, and many parts can still touch people's hearts. I think this is pretty good. All in all, this book must be difficult to write. I don't know how long the author can persist. Just like someone in the comment area said that novels with such grand backgrounds are easy to eunuch. I have also seen many backgrounds that I like very much, and the novels are gone as soon as they are written. There are books with excellent backgrounds and bloody plots, and there are also books with good quality in all aspects, but the writing is too slow, the data is not good, and they suddenly become eunuchs. There are some authors who are useless even if you cheer them on I hope this book will stick with me! Anyway, I will definitely subscribe.

It's a magic sect. If you fail to build the foundation, you will be slapped in the face by the 6th floor. All the fellow sects will beat up the fallen dog.

This protagonist's character, this plot development. So old

I can't stand it anymore when I see what other live broadcasts there are about cultivating immortals.

It can be seen that the skills are very deep. In comparison, the world of the protagonist is far behind. The key is that there is no protagonist's perspective, it is all the author's perspective of heaven. What about the five-domain dynasty competing for hegemony, observing the world from the perspective of a daily chess player during the Qi training period. The author should have written about science fiction corrections, but not the mortal upgrade stream.