Great Overlord: the Young Master of Buddha at the Beginning

The writing is messy and the narrative is unclear.

Too poisonous. The protagonist is in the spiritual realm when he is a teenager, and rapes Qing Yanjing, the "Grand Master of Holy Products". It made me laugh to death; to be honest, the writing is okay, your setting is really a ghost

The writing is too strange, the content is incomplete, and it jumps around. It is not like a modern novel, but more like a picture book describing the content. It is impossible for many people to read this level. The most urgent thing is that the author should first improve the level of his writing content, not the quality of the content. Because you can't even understand the most basic narrative