The Great Ruler: Starting as the Ancient Buddha Clan's Young Master

That's too cruel. The protagonist, a teenager at the Spirit Realm, rapes Qing Yanjing, a "Grandmaster of Saint Rank". I'm dying of laughter; to be honest, the writing is alright, but the premise is truly absurd.

The writing is rather disorganized and the narrative is unclear.

The writing is very strange; the content is incomplete and jumps around, making it less like a modern novel and more like a picture book narrating the events. This level of writing is unlikely to attract many readers. The author's immediate priority should be improving the quality of the content, not just the writing itself. Because you can't even clearly convey the most basic narrative.

Putting everything else aside, just the fact that she raped Qing Yanjing is vicious enough. Do you really think she wouldn't kill you? Even if Qing Yanjing did kill you, the Grand Elder wouldn't be able to say anything wrong; Secondly, they even used Mu Chen to threaten Qing Yanjing. Just reading that makes me want to laugh.