Douluo Dalu: I'm Not Yu Xiaogang the Second

General de Gaulle, how many divisions you have, I'm afraid you will be beaten to pieces by Marshal Rommel.

The author wants to write a good story, but the writing is not good. It is like telling a story, with a prelude, a process, a climax, an end, etc., But the author jumps in. It is possible that this is the end, and the next paragraph becomes the process again, and then when he tells the next thing, it becomes the prelude to the previous one.

Your writing style can actually support the small popularity of this book, and your creativity is actually okay, but your flashback is really trying to persuade you to quit. Even a ten-year-old bookworm like me can't stand it.

Is this going to create a free star?

What the hell is this? I can't understand it. It doesn't make sense at all.

Gee, after reading five or six chapters, I feel so chaotic

I'm sorry that I deleted a book review by swiping before. Every piece of feedback you have is very important to me. I will read it carefully and try my best to improve it.

Use less related words later, and be sure to force yourself to limit the number of related words you use in a chapter! I use it in every paragraph. It doesn't read like a novel. The tone is very stiff. I didn't use more related words in my graduation thesis.

Based on my understanding of the following parts, I proposed the method of soul core and the cultivation methods of the following parts. Entering the city of killing attracted several great god kings to rob it. I will briefly extract it for you after reading the opening. Otherwise, I will be reading the book of heaven. Chinese was taught by this author from a physical education teacher.

It's too long-winded. It feels like you are introducing yourself. It's too long-winded. And it doesn't feel like much, and listening to books feels boring.