A Multiverse Life: Starting with the Invention of a Portal Gun

However, if Ran and Sonoko Suzuki were to appear as the main female characters, it would filter out some readers. This wouldn't have been a problem if you wrote it a few years ago, but in recent years, well, anyone over 23 years old would basically feel a sense of disgust towards these two female characters. And Mai-senpai, I don't know why.

1. The four-beautiful bed in the opening chapter... I don't know what to say, because I feel like no one next door writes about this kind of thing anymore. 2. It cannot be said that there is no problem in the selection of the heroine. This is not a problem of a certain person's bad impression, but a problem of squeezing space for the heroine in the variety show.

Oh, I really want to have a top talent for writing books, and I can earn royalties for writing any number of words until my mouth is numb. Then I can live in my own fully automated luxury cabin for the rest of my life. In addition to watching anime and playing games every day, there is a 168 sweet-looking white stocking school girl who shares the room with me and teases me at the same time.

The author is indeed a newcomer; in order to establish the world-building, all the characters were introduced quickly at the beginning. But you're saying the female leads are all NPCs and mere plot devices, with the same personalities, like a broken record? I disagree with that.

Rick and Morty has already been written by the creative team into a piece of garbage where eight out of ten episodes are filler. I don't know why you're still working on it. You even wrote it as a finite universe. Infinity implies an explosion of imagination, but it gets emptier and emptier as it goes on. I'm talking about your creativity. Don't touch infinity.

The composition is complex, and it is unclear whether Shennong (the legendary Chinese figure) is involved. 🙂

The fact that a single name can cause controversy suggests the author is a newcomer. It's best if the main character sticks to one name; otherwise, it feels awkward for readers. It's been a long time since we've seen authors filter readers based on names.

I just finished watching and I have a question: the protagonist has already independently developed the teleportation gun, which means he's officially reached the same level as Rick and Jacket. So, since the protagonist has the superpower training kit, why doesn't he use it to research Full Metal, the most perfect and versatile metal? The technology in the Tinker Bell world is practically built on this metal.

Icarus

Why not change the Reverse Rebirth Triple Power to a Devil Fruit? Having cultivation techniques in anime just feels out of place.