Who Sees the Autumn Wind

Coming from a writer's assistant, I don't dare to comment too much on your style because I haven't written it before. You mentioned that your writing is very old-fashioned, but I don't think there is a different feeling. Maybe it's because there are so many abstract books in this era that I find yours quite refreshing? My brother read your book carefully. The introductory column below is quite philosophical, but when I clicked into the content of the book, I saw the beginning of the book, which looked like a diary. I felt that the contrast was a bit big. But it should be harmless. There is nothing wrong with your book as a whole. After all, it is based on something similar to a diary, so everything makes sense. You can carefully optimize and think about what is better. At the same time, you can also add a cover to your book. I don't have much else to do to help you. Why don't you take a look at my second book? "Journey of the Unknown Translator" Although the public thinks that my work is a stream of consciousness, it seems to be fine. It relies on my feelings and the feelings of the protagonist to drive the plot. In the latest chapter, I have also made a lot of changes. After all, this book is like my practice. You can also take a look at my process from practicing in the first chapter to the latest chapter. If my book can help you, that would be great. After all, I don't dare to comment on other people's books. I can only give vague help.