Three Kingdoms: I, Liu He, the Great Han Zhongliang!

This is my first time writing a book, so there may be many shortcomings. Please feel free to raise them. I will continue to revise and work hard. You can also raise plot issues.

The author has great potential, and it can be seen that the material has been carefully prepared, but the writing style is a bit rough. It would be better if he wrote more. The first chapter at the beginning would be more perfect if he polished it. I personally don't read a lot of history, especially the Three Kingdoms literature. I suggest you study books such as "I have Cao Cao, why should I fear the world", "The Last General Yu She, the Reincarnation of Hundreds of Worlds". Learning is not about copying books, you have to learn other people's writing styles, plot design, etc.... Come on, keep updating, and wait for signing or signing up.

Now that you have decided to write, don't spend three days fishing and two days drying the net.

You still need to write more and practice more. You can add some psychological description appropriately to prevent it from looking dry. Wen seems to look at the mountains and not like the flatness.

Come on, come on 👍👍👍

Okay, I don't like the story, it's quite attractive 🌹🌹🌹

It's exciting. I've always liked the works about the late Han Dynasty and the Three Kingdoms. I really like this one by the author.