In the World of Old, Must I Still Rule for Eternity?

The protagonist looks like he is trying his best to support his sister Why not write it in the introduction The role of the sister is a bit heavy, but the introduction does not describe it for the sake of authenticity The author is too bad Your Majesty

The writing is very good, do you want to cut it off? At any rate, it would be okay to recruit a few authors of books similar to your own to promote them.

So do you want to cut it off? QWQ😭

After reading Chapter 14, I still don't understand what the protagonist's golden finger is.

The main problem is that it is too bland. The main plot should revolve around the protagonist's upgrade, finding extraordinary elements and exploring extraordinary knowledge along the way. To be honest, deleting many words would have no impact on the plot (because the protagonist's strength or status has not been improved). Secondly, there is a little bit of excitement. There is no pretentiousness in the first place. The strength of the protagonist is also slowly improving. The great existence necessary for Cthulhu is only slightly related to the first generation Silver Moon. If you want to save this novel, author First, you can focus on 1-23 to describe the conspiracy or power behind this sealed object to increase the sense of crisis. Second, add some sealed objects that only the protagonist can react to. Third, add more roles for great beings. Let the protagonist get in touch with the great existence through some means to obtain some characteristics or sealed objects that only the protagonist has.

Still original? It seems that the original book is still not enough.

The hook is too small and the feeling of excitement is not enough. But this is the case with slow-paced novels. The rhythm is well controlled and neither arrogant nor impetuous. It is good to read carefully. However, after reading it for a long time, it still has not been discovered by the audience of this type of work.

This book gave me a strong sense of separation. The first eight chapters gave me the feeling of a socialist white rabbit in a semi-feudal and semi-capitalist society. It's so depressing, it makes me feel uncomfortable watching it

Unlike the previous book, the heroine is only one level higher than the protagonist. Can she keep up later?

The new book by the lv4 author, there are so few people