The Immortal Maiden Has Become Real, and She’s Plotting Against Me!

Is it interesting to deliberately write a wooden protagonist? 😒 An alternative death-seeking system. High talents cannot be used, and the death-seeking IQ is not enough. They also installed him into a wooden head, and there is no protagonist. It's over.

It can be seen that the author is a newcomer, his writing style is a bit immature, but his foundation is very good. Well, I have a set of Fen Jue here. I will give you a website. You can go in and write according to the novel in it. If you write it, it will definitely become a hit.

The story is very smooth, somewhere between grain grass and fairy grass, but I still gave the fairy grass. Character design: In terms of character design, the protagonist is a little more likable than other protagonists. The heroine's portrayal is currently a bit thin and facial-like. There are too many people appearing in a short period of time, and it may not be possible to describe it in detail at the moment. It is recommended to seek further training from Jiangnan or Chima Yinghuo. Lan plot: At present, although there are many reference points, it is still very interesting to watch. In terms of background setting, combat power system, etc., There is no detailed description. As a simulator novel, I think it is better. Writing: The writing is okay. The story and logic are tight. In terms of plot, I feel like I'm watching a TV series

1. There is a problem with the character of the protagonist at the beginning. The beginning is too long, so I can only improve it as much as possible, but the text has not been completely revised. 2. The cheat question is a bit messy, and the follow-up will tend to be a conventional simulation (personal entry) type. The requirements at the beginning were unlucky in order to survive and receive rewards, which caused a sense of comfort problem. This has been changed in the future, and rewards will be obtained if you survive normally. 3. The title and introduction of the book should be from Xuebai Tie Tie. In fact, some brothers have, but they were beaten back... And it is difficult to return. 4. This book is not finished, and the goal is to finish one million copies. I hope I can achieve it. Quan Qin will definitely finish it, and it will be completed three months after it is put on the shelf. 5. The rhythm of the opening chapter is completely broken, and it is worse than useless. The substantive crisis appears late. In the later stage, it has been optimized as much as possible, and the conflicts of large and small are in a cycle. No girls are given away, the male protagonist and the female protagonist must be tied up, and the female protagonist has no physical contact with other people! A pure multi-heroine ending (as long as it passes the review), the heroine will never take any pressure, she will only solve the problem, and the ending will be all-inclusive! Receive them all! Receive them all!

Draw cards... Draw cards...

Draw cards...

Mom's writing is so beautiful. I want it more. I want it more.

The author's writing is not bad, praise it. 😋

Not yandere? What's the purpose of simulation? It's interesting to put yandere elements into it, but your simulation will only produce one heroine... Try writing a two-line narrative, a single line is too boring, as if the teacher is reading a manuscript

Couldn't he be copying Xinhua Dictionary?