I Can Reverse Negative Effects

Looking at your profile, you copied everything. Can you pass the starting point?

I suggest you change the title and introduction of the book. When I first saw the title, I thought it was an AI novel. When I saw The Power of Nine Dragons in the introduction, I suddenly didn't want to read it because it looked too much like a retarded novel.

It's weird, in the steam industry era, no one in the local culture eats animal offal (there is no historical accumulation and it's the Stars and Stripes problem that can only be raised by cutting leeks from all over the world), and the protagonist treats lobsters that no one eats as delicacies (Is your river clean in the steam era? Don't lobsters eat as much food?)

There's a lot of nonsense, a lot of stuff, and it's quite messy. Then there are the plot events, where there are a bunch of people doing the same thing. There are 5 paths from A to B, which is equivalent to the author writing all 5 paths. People are working on all 5 paths at the same time. In the end, the problem is solved through one of them. This is the first time I have seen this writing method.

In the first three chapters, the effect of the Kowloon game is reversed, and then in more than ten chapters, the game system turns into a witch, and a large number of descriptions are made of the daily life of the three brothers and sisters, and the feeling of danger is low.

There are too many things to sew, and the main character looks like a fool

It's so strange. Starting from about 30 chapters, I went to about 60 chapters, almost 50,000 to 60,000 words, and kept describing the daily fights of relationships, going back and forth without being able to cut off the main line. The protagonist's power improvement has no real sense at all

The classic two-thorned ape Asasi eunuch male protagonist. Including strong Japanese speech, self-talk, pretentiousness, etc.

Personally, what is the biggest problem? Excessive description of the emotional tug-of-war between the three brothers and sisters. Having emotions is a good thing, and pulling is also a good thing. But all you talk about at length are emotional dramas. Then may I ask, am I here to see the emotions of your three brothers and sisters?

The selection of the two heroines and sisters is really random. I would describe it myself as even the bitches passing by must be included in the harem.