From Martial Arts Examinee to Lord of the Universe!

It's a bit awkward. I say it's not good, but I feel it's okay. I say it's good. That's all. It's all too deliberate. The retro feeling comes over you. And the protagonist has special powers. It's not clear why various cells were collected or what. That strong man doesn't have any secrets, do you have to confess them clearly? It seems to be aimed at people with superpowers. Why is it not clear?

🎭 Character: Martial Arts 🎬 Plot: Interstellar Martial Arts ✒️Writing: The reincarnation of the interstellar martial arts god. . The scribbling above looks like enough food.

The pace is too fast and it looks a bit laborious

The pace is too fast, and the previous text does not match the subsequent text.

Dude, why don't you put it on the shelves 😥

It's quite satisfactory, with a setting like "If I make a slight move, that's the limit of the system."

The writing is pretty good, I recommend it.