Simultaneous Travel: Starting from Xuanwu Kingdom and Sweeping Across the Heavens

Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit can be kicked out. Because there is nothing to write, many people will probably skip it. The stealing star Jiu Tian also kicked out. Nowadays, it's basically about selling feelings. How many years have passed and the plot has almost been forgotten. Very few have the patience to continue reading.

The Supreme Demon and the Martial Saint of the Ten Directions? Why do you want to grab Dark Blue?

Hmm... Waiting for Stealing Stars 😏 Mainly because I want to see my childhood regrets

The No. 1 In the world has been strengthened at an epic level. The author has at least raised the strength of the No. 1 In the world by two levels.

Can the Tianlian sect still fall in love? The upper pair was expelled, and the protagonist and the Eleven of Clubs got together again.

Not to mention the classic sinkhole trap under one person, are Hongmao and Stealing Stars serious?

Why is it that a large proportion of people who write about wearing the same clothes write about the same sun and moon? It doesn't seem to be well-known. What year was it produced?

I have read more than thirty chapters, and the writing is really messy. Is the author a newbie? If so, then I think your approach may have been wrong from the beginning. Including so many elements, you may not be able to figure out many of the mechanisms yourself. There are a lot of exercises written out in random without explaining the source, which makes me feel uncomfortable...

Isn't it a bit too fragmented to be number one in the world? In the first part, I was still trying to please you, but in the second part, I suddenly started to be neither humble nor arrogant? Of course I know that things will change after you gain strength, but the writing is a bit too fragmented. Otherwise, you should not be so flattering at the beginning, or you should be more arrogant later, instead of being neither humble nor overbearing.

Outrageous, why would you write this and travel through this genre at the same time? You clearly wrote it as an infinite flow

Don't sew up the honor of one life under one person, the honor of one life is just a cesspool

Really annoying

I am also speechless. Author, can you please respect the background of the original work when writing fan fiction? Many settings and everything are wrong.

Author, have you not read the memories of Manzhu Shahua in 567? Manzhu Shahua was brought back by the assassin leader and has a cooperative relationship with the assassin training institution.

Written by Nuan Xue... The head is pointed and difficult to read.

The author, No. 1 In the World, isn't the protagonist's interaction with the emperor too rude? He has to kneel down to thank him. Humph, he's unruly, so he's going to be taken out and beheaded! ! !

Should I write it myself? Why has the level dropped so much?

I'm still waiting for a copy of Get Out.

The third chapter on the shelves has changed the world. I don't know whether to order it or not. Why is it stuck in the first place in the world 😅

I just finished subscribing and found out that it was a star-stealer, so I cut it off.

The plot arrangement is still a bit far-fetched

It seems that the protagonist should be Ma Sanniang's son Amu

Finally waited for the fox demon. Fortunately, it was not deleted 🙂

New World Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit Legend of the Seven Heroes 🤫