Cleaners Serving the Whole World

I've probably read a few chapters, and I'm also a newbie in writing, so let me share my feelings. The writing is smooth and the writing style is quite good. It's just very floating, like leaves floating everywhere in the water, without any creative ideas. In other words, the starting point style of commercial writing ideas. There are no systems that novices can usually write about, including upgrade system routes, map construction, and map character levels, leaving readers with nothing to see.