Backroom Adventures: Backrooms

For some reasons, I have to rewrite all the chapters. I have not stopped updating and I am still writing.

It's pretty good. It would be even better if you change it according to some aspects I pointed out to you in the comments. It's already good to be able to write like this for the first time.

I took some time to watch the movie "Back Room" in the evening. It was indeed quite enjoyable and not as scary as I expected.

It can be seen that the author's writing style is indeed relatively immature. But I still think the author can try to continue writing without having to rewrite. (I think the andanto method is good. Finish one book first, and then continue to hone your writing skills in the next book. This is the most beneficial to the growth of your writing skills.) I think the most important thing when writing an article is to write it first. In fact, it is not particularly necessary to rewrite (follow my old path (you see now) I)) For our kind of writing (it can be said to be horror writing, or it can be said to be adventure writing), the most important thing is to describe a little detail, whether it is the rust of Ban Huang in the pipe nightmare, the bloody saliva of the hound, or the raised particles of the blanket on the (strong) yellow floor, they are all an indispensable part. Details, details, must be written in all aspects. Details will make people feel real and immersed in the scene. This is the shaping of an environment and atmosphere. (I think the difference between reality and virtuality lies in how many details it can provide. The more details, the closer the virtuality is to reality) It is normal for the writing style to be immature and the glitches that may appear in the future. I remember Teacher Yu Hua also said that novels can only be written with experience (maybe it will come naturally after you grow up for a while) Although I don't have any outstanding works, I think these are some valuable experiences that I have said, and they are still of great reference value. It's basically difficult to sign a contract after writing a back room article. We basically do it for love. I don't know how you will view your work. I think the mentality towards your work is also an important part. Doing things with love is always motivational (although writing articles may be boring in many cases) My energy is limited. Everyone can encourage and supervise each other to learn. Writing on a single computer is indeed quite torture. I'm quite happy after thinking about it (at least I personally think so). The main reason is that the community can have a harmonious environment where veterans can lead novices. (Although I'm not a powerful boss) If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.

@Everyone Chapter 6 has been revised several times, but I am not satisfied with it. Anyway, the plot is probably to go to level C-185 before planning, and then return to level 1, and then you can vote for the plot