Mortals: Starting from When the Descendants of the Han Family Go to Luoyun Sect

The writing style is very solid. The author writes well. Mortal flow is good only if it is steady and steady. Don't write in a mess. It has everything.

The author's writing is very good, almost the same as the original work by Mortal. Why is there no one in the book circle?

Why can the protagonist search for souls during his Qi refining period?

There is no problem with the writing, but the rhythm of the plot is not right, and the writing is off. According to the setting of the original work, after opening the jade medal, I went directly to Luoyun Sect to become a disciple. There are masters in the Yuanying stage, and there is no need to worry about resources before the Yuanying stage.

Now, except for Ling Yuling, will there be no original character in the entire human world?

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The author should be some extraterrestrial devil, but it is very difficult to write like this. Mortals who read the original novel will probably like it, but those who read the fanfic may not necessarily like it. By the way, since I plan to write about the reincarnation of the original character, can I give Mu Peiling a good ending? Mumu, my Mumu😚😚😚

To be honest, Mahayana Han Li casually gave me some guidance on a skill, elixir, or Nascent Soul. There is currently no god in the human world, right? Or is Ling Yuling the only god?

The plot is a bit delayed. I want to see the protagonist enter Luoyun Sect. What will happen if the elders know that the protagonist is Han Li's descendant?

Are you sure you are a time traveler like this? Why do you feel so and so?

Why did the update stop? What happened?

There are jade slips passed down by Han Li, and the inheritance of immortal magic is short of resources. Why not just go to Luoyun Sect directly? Didn't they give you a token from Luoyun Sect? I still need to ask for recommended places.

It's really well written, and it's 8 points like the original.

Why is the update delayed?

Very well written, don't stop updating it

It's well written, it's very flavorful, keep up the good work

If the protagonist cultivates to the point of becoming a god and ascending within a thousand years, he can still see Han Li. Han Li ascended in 8,000 years, right? Under Han Li's protection, he will almost be reunited in 2-3 thousand years.

However, there is no big chance in Chaos Xinghai. The Void Heaven Palace has been taken by Han Li, so he just resells the demonic beast inner elixir.

It seems pointless. None of this is fanfic. Fans, fanfics must have characters from the original work, there are no characters here. I can't arouse any interest. 🥱

The main reason is that the mechanism is too strong. In the case of the highest level of spiritual transformation, there is nothing to say that powerful magical powers or creations at the Nascent Soul stage can have similar effects, but its extremely large range cannot be justified at the Nascent Soul level. Powerful mechanisms among mortals are basically only available at higher levels of cultivation, such as the belly of Rahu, and some clones. But how can this small place with the highest level of cultivation attract the most powerful people to spend the price to project their power?

Except Lin Yuling is still alive. Are there other original characters who have become ghost cultivators until now?

It's over, your updates are too slow, I can't even vote for you.