Gou Lived in a Down-And-Out Family and Became an Immortal.

I can't stand the first two chapters. There are too many characters. I will introduce them in a few chapters. I also need to change the character descriptions and settings. If I can't write it myself, I will copy it first and then modify it.

I have finished reading these chapters The entry is okay, but the development is very strange, the causes and consequences are explained in a hurry, the logic of the characters' behavior is problematic, and the people cannot be established The events are very sudden In fact, the writing is adequate, and the setting has certain characteristics, but the story-telling ability is a bit poor It can be seen that the setting is very good The setting of the world view, but the most important thing in web articles is the sense of substitution and story content. There is some hope in signing the contract, but the writing method is wrong and it is difficult to achieve results Look at Dachixianmen. Dachi is eager to learn in the early stage, so it is better to learn how to write first.

It's so sluggish, please work harder later

After reading it for so long, I feel that this is the author's first time writing and the plot is incoherent, but the setting is very new and the writing is not great, but not bad. I hope I can keep writing.

Got it via Douyin🙂

It's okay, keep up the good work👏