Traveling Across Mortal World, I Am the Eight Desolate Immortal

The impression given by these first three chapters is that of a fantasy version of a divine novel. The protagonist is set to be a loyal spectator of the legend of a mortal cultivating immortality, but he changes the knotted elixir to a golden elixir, and the beauty to Yanli... It's hard to do! The amount of vocabulary is too high, I personally suspect it is AI.

I really like the subject matter, but the AI ​​writing is simply pouring shit on the gems, and no matter how good the subject matter is, it becomes difficult to accept. There is no doubt that it is AI, even the worst kind of cheap model AI writing still does not have any level of debugging. But if a normal writer writes a masterpiece, let alone a masterpiece, it can be regarded as a masterpiece that has no precedent for mortals. Let's take an example from the book: "You said." A simple word with no impatience, no contempt, and no hint of condescension. I am stupid enough to subscribe to this nonsense literature. You must know that the money I spent playing AI novels and reading them myself using this model is not more expensive than subscribing.

Newcomer and veteran, please give me some attention and help from the big guys

You have everything at the beginning, so what else can you write?