Wandering Around the Qin Dynasty's Career as a Sword Dealer

There are no radioactive depleted uranium swords.

The ones who advised the author to write about single women and not having a harem are the eunuch party. Their voices are loud and the raindrops are small. The harem party is the silent majority at the beginning.

Aren't the quality and content of novels the core? Why is it that the standard for the quality of a novel now is whether there are more or less female protagonists, or there is no female protagonist? Abstraction, ultimate snakeskin abstraction😰

Give away all the swords? What do you eat and drink? After finishing the sentence, I will monitor you very closely, the internal struggle will be fierce, and you will be treacherous. The hind foot told Luo Wang that there was no need to look for a sword-making place. You can change it yourself after taking the materials. Do you really think everyone else is a shark-arm?

From the moment I joined the snare at the beginning, I knew this book was a defense. The swordsmith joins Luo Wang to provide swords to Luo Wang, which directly limits himself. It's a bit ridiculous for the protagonist to give swords to Luo Wang's enemies at the same time! If I were a senior executive in Luowang, I would be strangled to death by the protagonist. It can be seen that the author's mind is not very clear. From the perspective of the protagonist, he can come up with such a plot that is in extreme conflict with his own interests. He is a genius.

It's a waste to throw away the useless food. First, although the protagonist got huge benefits from selling the sword due to the rules of Tongzi, but for those who bought the sword, they paid nothing. The author keeps emphasizing that others have lost money, and I don't know where the loss is? Secondly, there is no main plot, and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. He wanders around and writes wherever he thinks. He looks here and there, and it's very confusing

╯□╰Is the author screening readers? Chapter 1 Jumps out to kill people and sell swords for no reason. (Why, the life of the young girl is life, but the life of the man in the net is not life? And the author, are you planning to kill Qin Wangzheng? Are you ready to destroy the unification of Qin? You have begun to treat the net as an enemy)

Receive Mrs. Pearl?

Can you forge some famous swords from other worlds? For example, Lingshuang Sword, Wushuang Sword, Hero Sword and other famous swords.

See what it looks like

It's not as powerful as the original work at all. It's not even as good as the original famous swords of the Qin Dynasty.

Do you know why Shan Wu always speaks loudly and never fails to vote? It was because Qidian introduced female channels, and single female channels joined together. They used cmg's troll style of play and made crazy noises. As a result, they were beaten violently when they saw the vote.

It's a bit funny. You can control the weapons you send out. It's like you sold the arms and then secretly left a back door. If you want to fall out with me that day, I can use this batch of arms to attack you immediately. It may not matter to a small country. A big country will not tolerate this kind of thing. It should be the same in martial arts. I can tolerate the weapons in my hands being a little bit worse. But one day I was cutting with someone and suddenly the weapon ran away by itself. One word, withdraw.

Generally, there is no mark in this kind of copywriting. The single heroine is still in the harem. It is recommended that the book be deleted.

Alas, there are too many shortcomings. As a person who forges swords, let alone the plot description of sword forging, at least give the plot characters a plot in which they can understand that the protagonist is a sword forger. Good guy, you forge swords directly in the system space. You don't even have a furnace. Are you kidding me? Why don't you commandeer a nearby blacksmith shop? As for the skill of blacksmithing... Don't call it a swordsmith. It should be almost the same to synthesize a big sword. It can be synthesized with one click and given as a gift. Then there is the fourth-dimensional chrysanthemum. In your setting, can carrying a sword box be enough to kill you? Identified as a hoax work, it's a cool piece of writing that you can't read with your brain

In fact, the sword spirit is indeed a bit unpleasant. I will cut off your sword directly. The sword spirit is useless. The sword is just a weapon, no different from a gun. If you make a Barrett and kill Qin Shihuang with one shot, it is your destiny.

The author sets up the protagonist to be isolated from all emotions and feelings, and is only a witness to the plot. When reading a fanfic, you just want to be able to participate in the plot and feel the love and hatred of the characters. What's the point of turning into a robot? So what if there are multiple female protagonists. With this setting, the protagonist is destined to be a eunuch. If the female protagonist does not take the initiative, the protagonist is still pulling at the end

In fact, it's very frustrating. The protagonist wants a good reputation, but is afraid of trouble. It's okay, just put on a vest and use a pseudonym. But he keeps going around giving away swords. No one else knows who made those swords. Only the person involved knows. How can he get a reputation like this? ? Just one Xu? ?

Which editor recommended this novel. . . . . .

The protagonist really has a sword. In the story between Zi Nu and Nong Yu, I don't know why I care so much about Nong Yu. He commits suicide to save him over and over again because of Nong Yu. Then Zi Nu and Han Fei also use Nong Yu as a chess piece over and over again. The question is, if the protagonist cares about Nong Yu, why should he punish Zi Nu and the others? Or at least a warning? In the end, nothing was done, and he went to rescue Nongyu again like the NPC. What a mess. If you don't care about Nongyu, just leave her alone. If you do, you can either take her away or take care of the purple girl Han Fei, isn't it? Even the protagonist Gao Jianli took him to the Mo family. Is it difficult to take Nongyu away? I'm really impressed by the protagonist telling Nong Yu over and over again, and then Nong Yu treats the protagonist's good intentions like a donkey's liver and lungs, and the protagonist still has to save him, it makes me sick.

Without charging any reward, the so-called system [steals] all kinds of rewards from the sword master. Free sword. This type of novel. At the starting point, it is only suitable for mentally retarded children under 8 years old.

After reading the free chapter, the protagonist seemed to be a free and easy knight at the beginning, with a sense of detachment and ease, but later he suddenly became a philistine, insidious, and hypocritical. Sometimes it seems that you want to express the protagonist's kind-hearted nature and pity others? Then the protagonist is the one behind the scenes who is fueling the flames, but he suddenly sighs with anger and mocks the hypocrisy of others. But it gave me the feeling that the protagonist was the most hypocritical, even a little schizophrenic. Obviously the protagonist has a clear personality in the beginning, but then suddenly changes and occasionally becomes more literary. Is it because he was criticized for being criticized by the Holy Mother, so he changed the writing method? I feel that the protagonist is neither good nor evil, but I hate the hypocritical one... Can anyone tell me a little bit about what will happen when it is released?

I feel relieved when I see being scolded, just like a dog text

Tian Guang, Tian Meng, and Tian Hu are always in a state of phase shift and may appear at any time and place. There will even be two identical people in the same place, talking to themselves, right😂

There are three online articles that I don't read: I don't read a single heroine I don't read multiple heroines I don't read a novel without a heroine

There are famous female characters in it who are saved or guided away from the original work by the protagonist, but the protagonist basically doesn't touch them. Write about them being single and pure, maintaining a plausible relationship with the protagonist, but not giving any results, a pseudo-harem

The start is very toxic, md this is still a 25-year-old online article

I recommend a good book with a niche setting, "I Can Go to the Past and the Future". The first chapter is voiced by a female loli author. It is a light novel with a male channel. The background is a passionate adventure in the fantasy future interspersed with daily love. It mainly uses the floating city in the interstellar era as the world view, and the magic potion sublimation + prologue It is listed as the core timeline setting article, with wits + decisive killings, the plot is interlocking, and there are many foreshadowings such as grass snakes and gray lines. The details are controlled, the setting party, no bloody routines and brainless plots, the overall is relaxed, interesting and semi-invincible. Brothers and sisters who are interested can come and take a look.

I admire myself for spending the money to read this book. The author is really hopeless at the end. It's just yy pretentiousness.

I have read more than a dozen chapters and at least they have been expanded or polished with AI.