My System Updates Every Month

I think a learning expert can see how they spent the month, but the author skips over what they can't write. They can also write about fitness and how they spent the month, but that's also skipped. It's a bait-and-switch tactic, only focusing on urban riches and cashback, and consumption. You should change the title to "Urban Consumption System." I thought I could learn for a month, or exercise for a month—haha, skipping everything!

The main character is an idiot; it made me furious, he's incredibly stupid.

I won't comment further on the system. Judging from the book reviews, everyone says your writing is good? Where does this kind of rambling, disjointed writing style come from? It's ridiculous.

The system is good, it's just that I encountered a clueless protagonist. Honestly, even if you gave this cheat code to a pig, it would be way better than the protagonist.

The protagonist of this novel is so stupid and has such a high ego. His later attempts at a martial arts style are so outdated and ridiculous.

There are too many clichés in novels these days. Readers don't have the time to slowly reveal all the foreshadowing and settings like in old novels. This is an ancient master; take your time and write carefully. Don't worry too much about grades. Get back into the zone, get into the flow, and when you're writing with more enthusiasm, the novel will be more engaging, and your grades will naturally improve.

The first super learning cheat the system gave me was getting my driver's license in a month—it's so frustrating! In other novels, this cheat could get a mediocre student into a top university in a month, or an adult become a seasoned professional in their field. And the protagonist, after getting his license, what did he do the rest of the time?

What kind of writing is this? The protagonist is as stupid as a pig and can't even use the system. Later on, they even started writing about hidden strength and stuff. How many urban fiction readers read this these days? What's the difference between this and *The Return of the Dragon King*? If your thinking can't keep up with your age, then retire. Your approach might have worked in the early 2000s or 2010s.

I can't stand it anymore. How old is this guy? He should retire and enjoy his old age.

If you wrote it 15 years ago, it would just be an average novel. Let alone now, for poor people like us, it's best not to write about super-rich people.