Heavens: Secret History Walker

The novice trial copy is a bit long, and you can skip all the details. It won't be too late to write a copy when it becomes official.

I went to search specifically. I can't even find a pirated copy of the entire book. I don't know whether I should be happy or sad?

There is something in the title of the book, All Heavens: Looking for Shit💩Walker

There are three obvious problems with the previous book. First, the power system and performance are chaotic, incoherent and fragmented. The system refers to the name, realm, growth, weapons, and techniques of power. The typical one is that the face is still facing forward, in the clouds and fog. Performance means that when describing battles and other scenes, the characters cannot express their proper postures. Second, the script is incoherent. Despite the forced connection, there is no thread that connects them. Third, the original script is not original enough. The typical example is the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, which is a bit original, but I think it is better to directly apply existing comics, games, and movies. Or, like the final horror, go for the conspiracy theory, or adapt the original script.

Okay, you should be the second job

After reading a few chapters, the review reminded me of the ruling. What a pity the last book was. It was supposed to be about fighting and it was fun to fight, but it ended up being a calm character. The plot wasn't exciting enough either, and it hit a wall everywhere.

Naiyang, the target thrown early at the beginning, was not written very well. Muay Thai usually gives people the impression of being fierce and ruthless, and not caring about life, but it does not mean that it must be written according to this stereotype. It's just that Naoyang's fighting scene in the opening was a little duller, and there was no ferocious beast-like style, so the sense of oppression he brought to the protagonist was naturally not strong. There was no "terrifyingly strong, frighteningly strong" kind of intimidation that even if you break your head, you can't figure out how to come back. I don't think there's anything wrong with the subsequent plot itself, maybe it's just the atmosphere that's a bit off. Starting with an amateur, the time limit is one year, and the goal is to fight against the great boxer. This countdown should be written in a very urgent way, which makes people breathless when reading. The protagonist seems to be running on a bridge that is constantly collapsing. If he slows down a little, he will fall into the sea and be swallowed up by the darkness. However, when reading the book... It is inexplicably a bit unfocused.

🌹🌹🌹 Carry forward the world view of "Secret History". I was not satisfied with the last book. Already collected, recommended tickets are filled every day. 👍

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Can the author close his eyes while typing? I don't want to read second-hand words.

The plot is a bit confusing. The normal routine is to progress all the way to the arena and increase the body building progress, and finally face off against the BOSS. But as the author, you choose to intersperse the plot of the NPC, and it is okay to realize your true intention in the end. However, many aspects of the plot of the body casting were skipped. The previous story was so magical that it jumped directly to the BOSS battle. I was a bit confused. The preparation for the climax can be said to be in vain.

Last time he was the leader of the army, what is he this time 🪖

I feel like the writing about boxing is not very interesting, why don't I try to tear down Gu Huoniao again?

I really like this kind of novel that places the story in real or fictional history (from a distance, Alexandre Dumas is this style, and from a close perspective, Work Desire and The Old Castle are also in this style), so I really don't want this novel to be discontinued. But in addition to this kind of sunshine, for those of us who come to Qidian to look for books, should this book also meet the needs of lower-level people, such as being refreshed? If a dungeon is only enjoyable when it ends and is settled, then many readers will keep the book or only read the chapters after the settlement. So every few chapters, you get equipment, skills, upgrades, etc. Then these equipment and skills should be able to attract (please allow me to use this word 😃) readers, rather than suddenly appearing that has no connection with the context. For example, the suit system, such as combination skills.

When I saw the subject matter, I wondered if it was you, kid, why are you just making a fool of yourself again?

I've also finished reading the last book.

It turns out that the main world is a esoteric worldview! No wonder there is a secret history

Very well written. The novice copy can be completed in one go, and the experience is good. And the level of detail in the description of the fighting scenes is not low.

It was well written, but I couldn't stand it. Personally, I hate watching the fighting scenes. I have been reading books for more than 20 years. Tired of seeing it. Come on, author! There will be people who like to watch it.

After reading the comments and introduction, it seems pretty good. It's actually scary to be out of service for two days. I suggest you post a separate chapter to explain it.