Wasteland: the Machine Soars, and I Tear the Mecha Apart with My Hands

The key point is to not modify the refined version after AI polishing. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

In the chaos of society, no one is innocent. Even a three-year-old child comes up with the attitude of a savior. You are not the protagonist, and you can't even save yourself. What's important in novels is not the plot. What plot doesn't exist in tens of thousands of novels? What we look at is the mentality, the helplessness in reality, but the ability to overpower everything in the story. You didn't handle the first plot well. It's okay to be sympathetic, but you have to have the ability to control. Since you want to take a girl, you have to kill all the gangsters when they come to your door. Make your sister's home a magical cave. Everyone who comes in will die. Let this magical cave become the embodiment of your control. This is the psychological suggestion of a powerful protagonist. It pays too much attention to the plot, is the same, and has no connotation.

The writing is pretty good, but it's strange that my grades are mediocre.

A newcomer, but not a novice.