Marvel: A Saint Seiya Story Beginning with the Reality Stone

Mark it and skip it if you encounter it in the future. Che Zhuluan talks about the king, ai article

I have finished reading the chapters as of 26.7.22, So I'll leave you with a summary. I looked at the comment section and it seems that he is an old author. I guess he will be criticized after writing this post. So I am not going to reply one by one. Disclaimer in advance that this is all personal reading experience. If it is different from yours, please refer to your own experience. Let's talk about the advantages first: It can be seen that the author is very familiar with the works of Saint Seiya, and the settings are very clear and consistent with the original work. I don't know much about Marvel because I don't know much about Zhang Jiebei at the moment, so I can't see much more. It can only be said that the current setting is quite consistent, and there are no special dramas or dramas caused by the incompatibility of the original Marvel characters. This is rare. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the original work. If you want to write a good fan fiction, the character and basic settings of the original characters must not collapse. This is the difficulty of fan fiction. Readers who know the original work will not feel weird when they see this character. For example, Stark in the movie universe does not have a bad mouth or talk nonsense throughout the whole process, and he still maintains a serious character that makes people feel drawn to him. (This refers to another book) The following are the shortcomings: The author currently has a common problem among most online writers, which is that he cannot write (that is, he can write a story well and has many ideas and inspirations, but his writing skills are too low to express it correctly. I also have this problem in writing, but I do not make a living in this industry.) The main manifestation of this problem is: writing wherever I think, and unable to grasp the key points of the story. For example, the author writes about the protagonist having a fight with someone, and then suddenly when describing the topic, the topic deviates from the battle itself. I don't know how far it went before he reacted and forcibly brought back the original battle. This problem will appear in 90% of the novels written by online authors. They write a short plot paragraph. For example, the core of the paragraph is the protagonist fighting with someone, and then the author starts to explain himself. Explain why you want to fight him, what you originally wanted to do, or whether it is reasonable to fight him, and then add why it is reasonable and where it is reasonable. Simplified explanation: The author must interpret and describe some plot-related content. This situation is not only due to substandard business capabilities, but also a lack of self-confidence that readers may not understand. This way of writing simply means water. Because you can't see the actual plot advancement. One chapter basically explains the protagonist's behavior, the plausibility of the plot, or the settings of the original text and the author's personal settings. I mentioned above that it will be reflected wherever I think of writing. For example, in Chapters 15 and 16, the protagonist defeats the Black Elf Queen and Hammer God arrives. At this point in the plot, the author writes: Hammer God shouted the name of the enemy and then failed to find the person because he had been killed by the protagonist. Then when he sees the protagonist, he begins to prepare to take action. This description is done in a few sentences. Then things started to get interesting: after the protagonist's conversation with the Hammer God Loki didn't make sense, he was about to take action. The author began to explain that the protagonist didn't want to fight the Hammer God now because Odin was still alive and so on. After a long explanation, he concluded that he didn't want to fight. But in the plot, the protagonist takes action, so he starts to explain why he wants to fight. The simple summary is that the Saints will fight if they don't accept it (ps: what kind of fighting race is the Saiyan). Finally returning to the plot, the protagonist started to fight the Hammer God. After several moves, the Hammer God suffered heavy losses, but the protagonist did not win. Then the protagonist hits the head and wants to kill Hammer God. After all, he is the protector of Loki, the enemy who killed the protagonist's adoptive parents. At this time, the protagonist has the intention to kill, and the author starts to explain why the protagonist can have the intention to kill, first, second, third and so on. To simplify it: Because Ragnarok has begun since the God Queen was killed by the Black Elf, Odin lost his divine power. Then the author mentioned the original plot in which Odin was sent to wander the earth by Loki, and was later discovered by Doctor Strange and sent to a nursing home. He once again explained that Odin has no power because of the beginning of Ragnarok, and his power is gradually disappearing. He also has no ability to take care of these things in Asgard. Otherwise, why didn't he come out to take care of it when the Queen of Gods was killed? Later, it was ruined on the earth. Don't think I have too many words. This is how the original text was written. I have simplified it a lot. This last wave of explanations returns to the previous explanation, so it is reasonable for the protagonist to be murderous, because Odin is already a paper tiger at the end of the Light Crossbow. At this time, Loki, who had exiled Odin to Earth, pretended to be Odin and ordered Heimdall to open the Rainbow Bridge and pick up the Hammer God who was about to fight the protagonist. See the readers here carefully consider, isn't this a contradiction? What kind of new logic is this? Anyway, I was really confused when I saw the original article here. Could it be that God's will is still exerting its force? That's it. Be prepared to be scolded. It seems that this author has many old fans, but he is really unhappy about it. And more than 90% of online novels are currently written in this way. This is not the first time I have complained. Summary: Most of the plot is watchable, but occasionally the logic is confusing. You can read ten lines at a glance or just watch the dialogue. It is not suitable for those who are smart, experienced or bookworms. The summary I posted does not exceed 1517 words. The author wrote two chapters of my complaint about the story.

I just ordered the first version of Saint Seiya, so I cut it and now you've opened another one 😆😆😆😆 I'm really convinced

Like the title, whoever sees it will regret it, the subject matter is in vain, all kinds of disgusting oral habits, keep coming, coming, coming, coming, again and again, again and again, you*. The protagonist is also a psychopath, with all kinds of left-brain attacks on the right brain. One second he is a coward, and the next second he is about to kill his whole family. After killing him, he doesn't want to kill him anymore, and he wants to be friends again. The description of the plot is quite fragmented and intermittent and cannot be coherent at all. I read Chapter 19 and found that what he is called can be described in three words. I will use "career woman" to define it. Tell me what he is called in Three words! 😡😡😡😡 Ah! Please let me go with the daily guide. How about a more normal one?

I don't even have to click on this cover and add rice to it. I can confirm it by looking for it in the comments.

I really don't know what mistakes I have made in my life. Why did I randomly click on a book and listen to a book this morning, but I couldn't change it while driving, so I had to listen to it for so long. The semantics are unclear, the logic is inconsistent, the writing is rubbish, and the reading is not smooth. What the hell is it writing about Saint Seiya and toilet paper?

Family Man, the author has been exporting his thoughts. Without the plot, I thought he was reading popular science on emotional analysis.

It turns out to be Mi Yike's book. No wonder it's so ugly.

You deserve it for throwing yourself into the street. Other authors go to great lengths to explain that there is foreshadowing in hiding. You damn girl wants foreshadowing or not. It's all nonsense.

The author even included the taxi the main character took! What brands are listed? This,,? How to write it? This is not a detailed description or sufficient setting, this is pure water. What is even more difficult is that this paragraph is less than 100 words into the first chapter. This is really water from the beginning...