I Transmigrated into the Terrifying Heavens, but I’m Shi Jian
穿越恐怖诸天，但我是石坚
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- Ongoing
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- 561k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 1d ago
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- Qidian
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You, Shi Jian, are a bit incompetent. The guy next door studied under Shi Jian. Shi Jian can already produce super electromagnetic bubbles, and even created electromagnetic body refining and so on.
Hey, let me tell you how I feel. The author likes conspiracy theories very much, and re-creates the original story line. Although re-creating the story can make the story more exciting, it is boring to always bring the final villain to Xiaoli. How can Xiaoli be so powerful? I couldn't stand it after reading two or three articles. Can't you create an original evil organization? Do you have to turn it to Xiaoli?
Let's talk about AI writing, it's a bit different! It's not AI, but I really like Rory. It's a lot of nonsense It's the kind that feels good, but not completely good It's like wearing a ten-layer condom during sex
Sister Pomegranate looks young. A pair of miserable people
Sister Pomegranate Back then
It looks sloppy
If you don't have the writing style, I wouldn't recommend writing about a protagonist who is already in a mature stage from the beginning. Not to mention the way he speaks and speaks like a Taoist, does he look like a person who is several decades old? Traveling through the past for so long is a waste of time, right? Author, just look at yourself. The person you are now is the same person you were more than ten years ago. Can you speak, act, and be the same person? You will always be a primary school student. A college student's body contains the brain of a primary school student. Is this appropriate?
How can I put it this way? I really like the subject matter. As for the writing, I just feel like I feel good but not happy at all.
This time-traveling happens in the underworld, but how can it travel to someone else? It's okay to say it's about awakening memories from past lives or replacing concepts. Are you really the founder of the local government?
Isn't this kind of writing style just a fool's errand? Long Aotian's thunder dialogue. All it took was Nike to smile.
Less secondary creation and more character description. Try to minimize interactions with ghosts and evil spirits. This will reduce the scary atmosphere. Carry out in-depth development of the character's original skills.