I Became a Soul Guide After I Died

I have read Chapter 35 of the Guide to the Gray World, "Shen Zhaoyue" At present, I feel that the content related to the main plot is not as impressive as the introduction tasks in the first volume. The image of the protagonist Shen Yan is relatively thin. Compared with others (the gluttonous Xiaoman and Lan's mother, the clown, the Taoist priest, the teacher, the silent boy), they know that he is a descendant of the Shen family and has a biological relationship with Shen Zhaoning. At present, Shen Zhaoning's past is slowly unfolding, and as for Shen Yan, I personally feel that not much pen and ink has been spent on him. The description of him is more matter-of-fact and has no subjective initiative. In the chapter about the gambler, he could have left this uncomfortable and unsuitable place temporarily after informing the other party of the deadline, and took Xiaoman around to enhance friendship or study the nature and use of Nianhuo, instead of standing as a backdrop all the time. Gambling is not something that is advocated in the first place. No matter how detailed the description is, it cannot change people's stereotype of gamblers. As far as the results are concerned, they are indeed dead. 24 years old, both as a human and as a ghost, he is still young. It cannot be said that after Shen Yan died, he was completely cut off from his previous life. The world has not forgotten him yet. If there is a chance, he will definitely want to see his parents and friends again, even if they can't see them, even if they are dreaming 😢 Furthermore, Shen Yan's "feeling of being alive" among this group of people is quite weak. I don't know if it has something to do with the setting of the soul and the three corpses, or if he himself is an unsmiling person with little mental activity. I believe that everyone has their own unique way of handling the incident. Is the gambler's result considered fate or an accident? We only know that this incident caused a lot of damage to Shen Zhaoning. I don't know if Nianhuo has recovered it, but he must have lost a lot. In short, I hope to see Shen Yan's own growth, and slowly take charge of his own business. If he can't even fend off ghosts, let alone those who have evil intentions in the gray world? (The first time I write a long review, I will save my life🔨)

1. Lonely Ghosts: For example, Xiao Hei, whose name is on the protagonist's tombstone at the beginning of the chapter, and Han Zhiyuan, who died without a red line in the gambler chapter. It is not yet clear whether they can harm living people, but they pose a certain threat to other "ghosts". 2. The specific objects who are on the list and are led by the soul attractor: such as Lin Xiaoman, Fang Guiying, Zhou Kai, etc. It is known that Xiaoman also became the soul attractor because of the protagonist, and everyone else got on the ferry and headed to the unknown other shore. Although Xiaoman is in the same situation now, I believe he will return in subsequent chapters. Good brother Xu Mingchuan was saved by the protagonist, like a special living person with "yin and yang eyes". 3. Soul-Bringers: Residents of the gray world, everyone involved in the task of bringing souls. The current small group is headed by the ancestor Shen Zhaoning. They must not only bring back the people on the list, but also be wary of attacks by the "Nianchanhui". Use of the soul: After the soul leader completes the task, he can obtain the Nianhuo to assist himself. The soul itself can meet the nameless wishing master and become a part of Him (I forgot how it was mentioned in the article) or become a new soul leader. The Cheng Nian Association conducts simple and crude research on inseparable souls, including soul attractors. Combining the information about "How big is this world" in Chapter 58 and "Welcome to join" in Chapter 90, it can be inferred that the gray world has a long history and a large scale. The research on the Chengnan Society has also started very early. Maybe the high-level officials will be some historical celebrities who pursue "immortality"? 🤤 Furthermore, the soul quality extracted from the never-departed soul may not be the effect of the soul itself, but part of the ability of the nameless wisher. It is not surprising that it has side effects. Mortals who try to steal God's blessings will definitely end up miserable.

The books shelved in the high cabinet are covered with dust, and picking up the flowers in the morning and evening shakes the heart and soul. The ups and downs of cause and effect arise again, and the willows are hidden and the flowers are bright.

It looks a lot like Xiaolong, it really smells like that 🤓

What a great book, I especially like the author's talent

This subject matter doesn't feel like it has any high points, but it's well written and can be savored carefully. I'm personally quite interested in this book.

Does anyone have a critical review of my work?

I'm a little tired of the idea that God loves people. The core of this thing is not that God loves people, but that God needs people, so God needs to satisfy people.

These people know in advance whether their death date is a bug or a setting. It will be discussed on the Internet in a few days, and many vicious events may happen in these seven days, unless the person is completely isolated Why not write that it can only be seen after death, and seven days after death decide whether to tie the red line or not

The author's writing style is very stable, the framework is well constructed, and the setting is catchy at first glance. There are not many chapters at present, but it can be seen that the work is thoughtfully conceived and patiently developed in the future.