Drawing the Sword in Heaven’s Will

I just finished reading Chapter 24 and would like to share my personal views. Getting the innate power first is too deliberate and unnecessary. Internal skills are not martial arts moves. The more you practice, the better. If the internal skills are not inherited from the same origin, there will be conflicts if practiced in too many types. Moreover, Zixia Kung Fu is not bad, at least it is a first-class upper level Kung Fu. And the protagonist's character image is of superior understanding. In this case, why not write about the protagonist practicing Zixia Gong, revising Zixia Gong, and then deducing Zixia Gong into a super magical power that is not inferior to the "Yi Jin Jing"? This is not inconsistent with the character of the protagonist (the swordsmanship of Jade Girl is also unnecessary). Also, the protagonist learned the Kunlun Sect's Zhen Sect swordsmanship just once after watching a fight between the Kunlun leader and his wife. This is too exaggerated and unreasonable. The moves of a sect are just the skin, and the inner workings are the foundation. Otherwise, each sect would have no secrets. Actually, I think that even if you get the secrets to master the magic skills of various sects, you should not be able to practice them. Each family should have its own set of code words, either passed down orally, or like a password, so as to ensure that the magical skills of the family will not be leaked (just like Swordsman, the Demon Sect has Wudang's "Tai Chi Sword", but no one has practiced it). Of course, if you are a martial arts master, it is another matter. Nonsense, welcome to discuss. . .

The cheats are too harsh. I feel like I have learned all the essence of Huashan in three years, and then you still have to give the protagonist another trick that makes you think too much. Moreover, Linghu Chong's method of discovering the cave is similar to that of Swordsman. You really don't know what to say. I feel that this plot can be completely removed. It is too redundant.

Writing about Yitian seems like he wants to rebel and take over the world. Otherwise, it would be a shame for Zhu Chongba. Because Lao Zhu is too good at killing donkeys. Few of the founding heroes died well. There are a lot of Yi people🔨

Internal strength still needs to be integrated into one. How can you be so messy and want to practice everything? It's not martial arts.

In fact, Gu Long's martial arts skills are quite interesting when he beats Jin Yong.

Wow, the fanfic uses a roadside character as the heroine, and it's still a single heroine

Tomb Raider, dancing in yellow

The Ruyi Demon has come out. Since he has such a heaven-defying talent, he should be able to deduce the ancient dragon series of secrets! Otherwise, there will only be a few types of Jin Yong's martial arts secrets that come and go, and no matter how much you write, you won't be able to make fun of them.

Generally speaking, the writing is okay, but I like to add settings randomly, and it is very unreasonable, so I gave up.

There is a righteous hero in front of you, but if you insist on using poison to control others 😐, the character you wrote will collapse.

The front is fine, but the back is getting more and more boring. I'm learning other martial arts here and there, but it's too much but not perfect. I don't study in depth, so I just rely on pig's feet to understand, okay? Then you wrote that pig's feet are now invincible! There is little progress in the main plot of the story. After learning martial arts, I went to show my sage in front of others.

Yitian and the proud Huashan sect should not be from the same family, right?

After reading Chapter 50, I feel that the character of the protagonist is quite hypocritical 🤐, take care!

This heroine is a failure. I feel like it's almost boring. It can't be better without a heroine. It's a bit redundant.

Well, it's not bad. For this single heroine, it's not just Zhou Zhiruo or Zhao Min, but she is actually the descendant of Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu. I feel comfortable. I've turned to the last page and I can follow it, but I just don't know if the author is Old Man Gong...

Smelly foot wraps, smelly and long,

The sword comes out of Huashan, and the immortals fly from the sky

The writing is very good, and the illustrations are also very nice

Chapter 1: I'm going to talk about some messy things and smooth them out.

The uncomfortable part about Jin Yong's books is that he always likes to write about his family and country. It is obvious that assassinating an emperor can solve the problem, but the protagonist's martial arts is terrible, so he refuses to write about it.

The writing is very good, unlike a new author, the writing style is sophisticated, the conception is exquisite, and the plot is exciting. I hope to keep writing, Jin Gu Huang Liang Wen can do it

The single heroine is great, you don't even need to watch it

The protagonist's name is too straightforward: Bai Prostitution 😠

Guo Xiang is definitely not comparable to Mie Mie. If he can use the incomplete Nine Yangs to create the Emei Nine Yang Skill, his rank is more than one level higher than Mie Mie.

Is there any Shennong🙂🙂

Why do you feel more and more hypocritical?

I have always liked Jin Yong fan fiction. But the protagonists in all the books are almost from the big sects. The sword comes from Huashan, the sword comes from Hengshan, and the sword comes from Hengshan. Although they are all well written, they are indeed a bit boring. It seems that the small sects are not worthy of the protagonist. When I first glanced at this book, I thought it was still Huashan, so I didn't want to continue. But the golden finger used by the protagonist happens to be the setting of Wanted, a Jet Li movie universe that I like, so I insisted on reading a few chapters, and unexpectedly found that it is very interesting, the writing is beautiful, and the plot is very reasonable so far, so you can check it out.

After reading dozens of chapters, I'm still a kid and it's not interesting.

It's all water, water, water. It's not suitable for old bookworms, but for those who haven't read much of Jin Yong's original martial arts novels, only TV series or something!

This book is almost finished. Do you have any clues about the new book?