The Outcast: The End of Desire, Refining the Spirit in the Niwan Palace

Overall it's alright, but the main character talks too much, always spouting things from the future, and the characters' dialogue doesn't have the feel of that era; sometimes it jumps out with modern phrases, which is a bit jarring.

Their strength cannot surpass that of modern weapons, and their lifespan cannot exceed 100 years. They talk about cultivating both body and mind all day long, but they can't even get past robots equipped with firearms. In terms of promotion, it cannot be promoted to the general public; in terms of education, the illiterate population is as high as 99/100.

Zhuge Liang's older brother is named Zhuge Jin. Do you want to be your ancestor's brother?

Surely no one has known the Samadhi True Fire since Zhuge Liang, right? If something hasn't been mastered for nearly two thousand years, it wouldn't have been passed down. With so much distortion over the years, errors are likely to have occurred. I remember the original text mentioning that for many years no one knew the Samadhi True Fire, not that no one except Zhuge Liang knew it. That's outrageous. 😅

First, I hope you write well and finish writing.

Did you forget when you wrote it that the main character is only eight years old?

[The End of Sexuality]: The Yang God manifests countless thoughts, telekinesis, the Tsukuyomi world, reality warpers, multi-threaded consciousness, free traversal of dream dimensions, arbitrary connection to Alaya (C world/inner landscape), sixth sense to tenth sense, rewriting consciousness, I think, therefore I am, the power of my thoughts, observing all timelines, projecting consciousness into all worlds, infinite mind, ...

Anyone can see that someone's worldview has collapsed. If you can't, you can buy a Border Collie. Ask if you have any questions.

Under One Person: A Certain Scientific Railgun?

Do your best this time! 🙂