Starting from Being Saved by Uncle Jiu

After reading it overnight, I can only say that it is not based on my personal aesthetics. It is unsystematic and purely about cultivation and upgrading. It seems that there is still no female protagonist. The time span is huge. The male protagonist is not a time travel in the traditional sense, but an awakening of memories. He takes the place of himself in this life. I can only say that the above is a bit unacceptable to me personally.

It's completely a handwritten movie, even without the main character. What a waste of time!

The first three chapters of yours are like giving an outline, without any sense of immersion, and the storytelling is too poor. Let's see how it goes later. Let's add a bookshelf first.

The author was finally scolded by these trolls and ran away, awesome

The writing is equivalent to a weird novel without character dialogue.

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Are you writing an outline? After writing so much in such a short time, it doesn't matter if you feel unsatisfied, but at least there must be some ups and downs. Then your level has improved too quickly, and you have nothing of your own.

Accepting the disadvantage🙂🙏

Uncle Jiu has another apprentice in the world of heavens

Oh my god, this writing style, the whole "and then... Then..." Can be recommended in a new book? Are there really no books?

This writing style is really good, please practice it more, it's stumbling, this is how it looks when you read it, there is no malice