Only Yesterday She Didn't Exist

The overall logic of the text is not smooth, and there are often jumpy descriptions that make people unable to help but go back and figure out the logic. It is very easy to get into trouble, as if watching a series of stream-of-consciousness montages. The plot design is boring, in fact, there is basically no design at all. Even if it is told in a straightforward way, it is a running account that cannot be read. Although it is very lengthy, the reading feels like reading an outline, or a detailed outline, which is very strange. The descriptions that should be given are not described in detail, and the hints that should be given are unclear, so the content of the links seems to be unimportant and understated, without highlighting the key points, and I don't know where to focus my attention. It is a very painful reading experience.