Versatile Mage: Path of God

Can this be written to completion?

After reading the first two chapters, there was too much nonsense, and even more repetitive nonsense. One sequence beeped for a long time, and there were a lot of useless descriptions of passers-by. It's so simple. When writing a fanfic for the first time, don't try to cover everything. Write everything without thinking about the word count. Write it first and then make it fluent. At least it can be read by others.

I wanted to say something, but I didn't watch it anyway.