Yefu Begins as a Full-Time Mage

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It's boring to have such a strong ability but keep being a babysitter in the original plot.

It's too poisonous. The protagonist is already invincible and has to be a nanny.

This book is good, please create a group to continue writing it.

In the first chapter, he slaps himself in the face, which is completely different from the description in the introduction of just hanging on to things that have nothing to do with him.

Poison, really poison. Invincible talent, rubbish mentality. The author also allowed Mo Fan to watch the protagonist's wife take a bath, and also allowed Mo Fan to describe her figure to everyone unscrupulously. I really can't stand it, I feel really uncomfortable

I don't even know whether you are writing about Ye Fu or a human being. Since you are so free, you could just write about a person who has the ability of Ye Fu. It makes me feel uncomfortable when you write like this.

For self-entertainment, the main character is too involved, and there is no need to participate in the plot.

I have something to say about Quanfa Humans are always weak in the magical world. No matter how strong the protagonist is, he can only kill a middling emperor by himself. Regarding the issue of the rise of mankind, we can consider the "Two Souls Project". As the name suggests, it is to allow people on the earth to travel to the magical world like Mo Fan and have the memory of the scientific world. As we all know, the magical world and the scientific world are parallel worlds. All people in the magic world have identities in the scientific world, so the dual soul plan can bring some benefits 1. Let everyone have two souls. Basically, it can be said that everyone is born with dual souls. 2 People in the scientific world can use the combination of science, technology and magic to create brilliant sparks. (1) Scientifically use physical principles to create some self-defense clothing that can disperse damage. (2) Some scientific technologies can store some magic, which is to release a magic of any level and then put it into a container for storing magic. It can be used at critical moments (releasing a primary magic can be stored in a vessel, but the user must awaken this magic and reach the primary level) 3 People in the scientific world bring not only technology but also advanced concepts, thoughts, chemistry, and technology. (1) Chemical reactions of some seemingly very common substances can make expensive resources cheap (don't think it's outrageous, before the invention of the Jenny machine, who knew that a few pieces of wood of different sizes can greatly improve the weaving efficiency) (2) Use chemical reactions or technology to fully and completely utilize the remaining value of the demon corpse (using demon fat as civilians can also be used to kill demons as self-defense weapons, etc.) (3) Let civilians use weapons made from chemical reactions or principles to kill demons. The above are all the opinions. If this suggestion is agreed by many people and book friends who want to see it in the novel, please give it a thumbs up. If more people agree, it proves that this opinion can be adopted. If you don't agree, just add "I don't agree with this suggestion" under this comment. If the latter comment is in the majority, it proves that this opinion cannot be adopted.

To be honest, I feel like it doesn't matter if you write this book or not. If you look closely, there is nothing happening at all about the protagonist traveling through the past. The plot is still the same. It's the same as the book I read. There's nothing new. It's so boring.

I hope the heroine is Mu Ningxue

Everyone, please stop reading. You are just a licker.

After reading Tang Yue's chapter, I came to the conclusion that the stream of invincible pretentiousness and sending girls and equipment feels solipsistic and detours are very poisonous for readers.

Night Mansion Monster

With such a strong ability, of course there need to be more female protagonists. It is best not to be a nanny for Mo Fan. It is good to beat up Mo Fan occasionally.

The plug-in is too big. Versatile Mage, please read it again and take notes. The space system also requires mana.

Go home, what the hell are you writing about?

Although I have read many fanfics and drank different poisons, I have developed resistance to the poison. But I still can't accept the eunuch article

After becoming Ye Fu, he followed the plot with Mo Fan, directly robbed Xie Kai, tortured the holy city, killed the sea monster, broke into the forbidden land and fought on the roof, and finally fought the Dark King. He didn't understand how to use the configuration of Invincible Shuangwen to take the upgrade route. For Ye Fu, improving his strength is the easiest thing. If one fight is not enough, two fights are enough.