Can You Stop Wearing It?

I can only say that it is not pure enough. From constant time traveling and then to modern superpowers, I feel that the purity has been reduced. Firstly, it is selling sheep over dog meat, and secondly, the fun level has also been reduced.

I read a book a few years ago that was similar. It opened a random space channel for a few minutes every once in a while. It seems that in the early stage, it even opened in front of the ruthless emperor.

At first, looking at the name, I thought it was about the protagonist traveling through different worlds. After watching it, it turned out that the protagonist repeatedly jumped between the two worlds, and then I saw that the protagonist stayed longer. What a hook. The only characteristic of this book suddenly disappeared. Suddenly everyone was stunned.

It's like a novel from ancient times, hahaha😁

The writing is very confusing, and I can't tell what you want to write. If it was like this before it was put on the shelf, I would have to discard it.

I've only read Chapter 10. The trash can is a little noisy, isn't it? Is this time traveling to the Borderlands?

0.35 Points ~ 0.39 Points

Is the connection between random worlds too blunt?

? A bit like a dead eunuch!

First of all, make sure to keep updating and keep it from being unfinished, and try your best to write it well. Secondly, it's not trying to sell things to others, it's just that the updates are slow, and I want the logic to be smoother. Of course, it's up to you to judge whether the writing is good or not. The whole book is probably a little over two million words long. If it catches my eye, give me some motivation. You can let me write faster. Don't scold me, I have a fragile glass heart. I scolded and cried, you have to pay for the medical expenses. It is my goal to finish writing, and it is my dream to write well.

It's very strange to see

Preferably gender, occupation, character, ability. Be a good guy or a villain, be cool, etc. Female characters choose their own flowers, and male characters choose their own items.

The beginning is in line with the introduction, but then it becomes ordinary.

I said you can change places randomly? Isn't that tailor-made for robbers?

Dear author, which group did you find and who signed it?

I am the third post. I am a veteran and follow the author. I am not related to each other.