Surviving as a Martial Saint: Beginning with the Mountain-Shattering Fist

Is what you wrote reasonable? My sister-in-law's writing is so beautiful. At this age and her family is incompetent, she has been snatched away long ago.

An ordinary apprentice who has just become a master can stimulate fluctuations in qi and blood just by being taught a posture and listening to a few words? What the hell is this martial arts training? The power of energy and blood transmitted from the earth is purely "the power of my thinking", okay. The author did not even sort out a system when writing the book. He wrote whatever he thought of, without any logic, and he wanted to inherit the writing methods of Ming Jin and An Jin. The division was serious. A martial arts gym that was in recession and almost no one went to it had only five new apprentices. As a result, two had first-class qualifications and three had second-class qualifications, including one (protagonist).

Asked about other authors. Also ask you. Author: Your father and your second uncle are cousins? So the protagonist in the book and his cousin are also cousins, so they are called Lao Ciao? Or cousins ​​with the same surname? Can the author tell me where this cousin came from?

Can you have some logic? Is the male protagonist a B-level guy or an A-level guy? Earlier, we talked about the roots and fruits in the second class. Your sentences don't make any sense. Haven't you learned Chinese yet? Don't know what to write for you? As a result, this system was still recommended to me. Really convinced.

The same routine as the beginning of other books

How could a chaotic society with low productivity produce so many warriors? The underlying economic base determines the high-rise buildings. A safe environment, a large population, and a good economy can support enough talents.

You can actually beat three chapters in a fist fight. Extremely speechless. Three chapters haven't been finished yet.

Shennong couldn't hold on any longer! Lift it down

First, the situation and social environment were described in such a bad way, but it cannot explain how my beautiful sister-in-law survived. How did the eccentric grandfather of my family preserve his wealth? After all, according to the author's description, the underworld has gone to such an extent that it has broken bones and sucked out marrow. There is no reason to let go of the grandfather and the beautiful sister-in-law who have no backing or support. It's not completely round here. Second, just because they don't want to call the protagonist senior brother, there are two genius junior brothers born from civilians, so they start to suppress the protagonist with all kinds of yin and yang. If you want to say that the two of them are eldest young masters, I still find it barely understandable. They were born as common people, suffered from the oppression of the underworld, came to the martial arts hall to change their fate, and they are quite talented, so joining the group with themselves as the core is the best solution. In the end, just because they called the protagonist senior brother, they pushed a person with great potential into the opposite. It can only be said that the IQ and behavioral logic of these supporting characters are no longer worthy of being human. Third, the power system is copied from Ming Jin and Dark Jin. The protagonist relies on proficiency. Without advanced skills, beating people of the same level is like beating a child. However, before practicing martial arts, the master still said that the protagonist lacks energy and blood. This power system is inexplicable. Fourth, all the actions of the protagonist are driven by the plot. There are a lot of things about changing one's fate against the will of heaven as mentioned above. In the end, the protagonist does nothing and only moves when the plot is reached. It feels like an NPC in the game. Above, and many others. I really don't want to type anymore. Come on, author.

There are a lot of poison points, and the basic character relationships will be wrong. I don't think a normal person's handwritten text would have such a weird plot.