The Afterlife Care Company for All Worlds

A world on the verge of natural destruction is either depleted of resources or has excessively high internal entropy. In this situation, where did these strange things come from? Doesn't generating this outrageous thing require resources? Are miracles and magic free? So, this near-destruction was caused by an external enemy?

This book is definitely special; it's the first time I've ever seen a book with a gold border.

Thank you everyone! 🙏🏻

I felt the second part was a letdown. The protagonist seemed a bit too saintly, and liked to force his modern values ​​onto ancient times. Who could stand the scene where the old woman was wailing in the street? In broad daylight, amidst the hustle and bustle, she was wailing in the street, saying it would bring her husband's soul back.

It seems like no one realizes just how outrageous the protagonist's D-class gluttony is, capable of releasing all the energy he ingests at once. TNT is like a little girl in front of him (Fun fact: Butter has 8 times the energy density of TNT; the calorie bomb is no joke, it just doesn't explode like a real bomb).

The author's problem is that he's okay in the early stages, but he can't maintain that level in the mid-to-late stages. He inexplicably can't handle the pressure and collapses. My advice to authors is to start by writing the outline and then ignore the comments section.

It's kind of funny; the daily recommendation service suggested another book to me, but the author seemed to have skipped all the recommendations and just rejected it, wasting over 100 of my coins.

Ever since "The Short Day," I've had a sense of déjà vu. When I saw the part where Li He slays the Candle Dragon (time), I felt pretty certain. Did the author also watch that Sci-Fi Vision video, or perhaps they watched the original fan-made work? That's why they chose to link Li He with time loops in the first instance. Of course, I don't mean to say it's plagiarism.

Why doesn't the author go back to writing magical girl stories? There are quite a few books in that genre on the new release charts right now. Or you could rehash your previous book and make a Legendary Willow 2, that would be better than all this constant cutting and slicing.

The lack of follow-up is inevitable. You finish one dungeon and haven't even seen your main character's gear before jumping straight to the next one, which naturally generates a lot of resentment.