Marvel Ultimate Creatures

I can only say that I saw a lot of bugs in Goldfinger in the first chapter. Bugs where the author strengthens the protagonist's thinking and bugs where Goldfinger is not clearly defined. Goldfinger needs to be limited. If you don't limit it, then people will say you are not good at the development of Goldfinger. Just like me, because it is a reasonable development, but the author did not write it out, it is easy to be scolded, or it is easy for people to say it out. So I concluded that this book has a high probability of being sold out, because this is a problem in the first chapter.

Superwoman, Superman, monsters who can kill Superman, There are even more powerful ones than Superman, who can turn people into shadows Also, Troublemaker, that is the god of the five-dimensional space Marvel has many superpowers, such as the Speed Force, the Chaos Chaos magic Supersonic running, and people who came alive from ancient Egypt There are also Egyptian pharaohs and Egyptian gods, such as Beerus The moon god, and Greek mythology, and the Zeus system The Himalayas, Marvel is a multiverse

The protagonist is a stallion, the plot is about killing and killing, and the women are reaping and reaping. The rationality depends on the protagonist's human nature💊. The characters' language and dialogue are well written, the rhythm is also good, and the outline is also there. . It's just white.

As for disgusting people, Chapter 47 is disgusting and abandoned.

I don't know what to say. You have spent several chapters describing the emotional description that you can't write well at all. You can't make the readers feel immersed and refreshed at all. You have spent several chapters describing Betty's father-daughter relationship and describing the protagonist's behavior as a Chinese-style son-in-law. I don't understand what you are thinking.

There are so many vampire plots written by Marvel fans... It's a bit boring. The protagonist has always been pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. He has always been very crazy, but once he was angered by the enemy's words, once his weakness was found, and almost overturned twice, it seems that the protagonist is very s. B. If you can't write it, don't write it. Just use your full strength, and Marvel doesn't need to suppress the combat power. At the beginning, he said that he would copy the Hulk's abilities. Now he is still waiting.

It's written like an urban novel, but with more of a Marvel and vampire background. The protagonist is just a harem man, pretending to be cool, slapping people in the face, and recruiting all kinds of influence.

How can I put it, Marvel itself has released a serum warrior. God damn, the divine power of the child can be obtained through the serum. Marvel has no shame, so the setting of the pig's feet is completely tenable. It is best to get the ability of the sentinel [reality modifier]

I've only read the introduction, so I'll give you a guide based on the protagonist's abilities. First go to the Arctic Avengers Mountain and chew a mountain. You will at least be at the single universe level. Then go to the sea to chew a tiamut and the three infinity stones on the earth. Then go to the void to chew soil. On the way, you will eat the other three. I ate an Infinity Stone as a snack. At this time, I was at least at the multiverse level. I found Uncle Tun who was floating around and took a bite (please make sure it is not Uncle Tun who just happened to be full before taking a bite, otherwise you will be responsible for the consequences). Then you can go to the Life Tribunal to taste it. At this time, we can probably spar with the four gods of creation: eternity, annihilation, infinity, and death. After eating these four, only OAA is left.

You can watch it, it's a bit annoying for the protagonist to pretend to be cool, and his strength also improves a bit too quickly. If you want to write it as a comprehensive story about the world of American TV dramas, it's best to mark it as a vampire family from the world of American TV dramas.

The Extremis virus, Thor's blood, and the super spider that gave birth to Spider-Man, these can all be planned

Mystique, and then there is the adaptability evolution, this one is also included. Then there is the Black King's ability. Professor, and then absorb Magneto's, it should be almost done.

Snow White Queen Psylocke and even Female Loki

One hundred and eighty heroines are fine.

The Thunder Agents also have many people with abilities, including Jessica, Luke Cage, Electro, as well as super soldier serum injectors, human enhancement agent injectors Green Goblin, Extremis virus injectors, Heart-Shaped Grass injectors, and Inhumans, etc.

The more I look at it, the worse it becomes. Too many common sense mistakes make me uncomfortable.