
Naruto: The Defense-Breaking System Brings a Little Pressure to the Shinobi World
火影:破防系统,给忍界一点压力
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- 710k Words
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- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
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- 3d ago
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- Qidian
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Uh-huh
On the surface, there is pressure from a bad mouth, but in reality, it is still the same as a fetter, and sometimes I act and stand up at the same time. When I have a bad mouth, I have an inner monologue about why... To clean myself up. If the epilepsy is not in place, it is better not to have it at all
How should I put it? His bad mouth is too bad. Even his shadow clone has bad mouth. This is a psychological distortion. It makes me extremely uncomfortable. A male protagonist who likes to bully will actually blush when Hong sees him. I really can't think of anything lovable about this kind of protagonist 😅😅
The protagonist couldn't control his mouth, and the author lowered his head. Then the protagonist couldn't control his own shadow clone, and it was difficult to hold back
Every time I see the protagonist unable to control his shadow clone, it reminds me that the protagonist is a loser
Chapter 3 slipped away
After reading 3 chapters, there were two things I didn't like and I left it. First point, the original work probably did not mention the specific losses caused by White Teeth. In order to balance the perception of the protagonist Kakashi with a bad mouth, the novel made the losses caused by White Teeth concrete. It is said that more than a hundred ninjas died and more than a hundred families were broken. If White Fang had committed such a crime in the original work, then White Fang's suicide would have been an advantage. However, in the original work, White Fang's suicide felt more regretful. The cognitive conflict between the author's own design and the original work and most fans will give people the feeling that White Fang is intentionally black and white in order to balance the perception of the protagonist. The second point is to embarrass the third generation. It is said that the third generation has always occupied the monkey demon's channeling and does not give it to others. To be honest, I don't dislike the plot of the third generation of Hokage, but it is better to avoid such embarrassment.
Uchiha Ling ❌ Uchiha Bullying ✔️
Let's open it 50-50
The protagonist has another classic trash start. He is obviously an Uchiha, but his most basic hardware is the same as that of a civilian. In the original book, Obito Metkai Naruto is also a low-level character, but his physical fitness indicators are no problem. Another point is that the protagonist's strength is enhanced purely by adding points through the system. Others have improved significantly after a month or a year, but the protagonist has remained unchanged after practicing. This is understandable. The most difficult thing to break is Mingming Ba's will, but in the end he leads his classmates to increase their strength.
Chapter 33 Why choose Wind Escape Breakthrough? Are you an Uchiha lacking in ninjutsu? Shouldn't chakra or attributes be given priority? Then you can wait until you have more chakra. Learn how to make a shadow clone and practice it yourself. You can even copy it yourself after you open your eyes.
The protagonist's bad mouth is nothing more than that, it cannot touch the soul.
A simple personal attack, that's all it feels like.
Pressure?
Be careful, Yuliang will attack you directly