Lord of the Mysteries: From the Start, Proposing to Audrey

After reading the first three chapters, there are so many flaws that I don't know how to complain about them. First, the Loen Kingdom of Lord of Mysteries is based on the United Kingdom during the First Industrial Revolution. Ordinary workers could not enter the residential areas of the rich without being driven away. Second, even if you really succeed in entering the residential area and causing public opinion impact on the Hall family, it will not cause any damage to them at all. Public opinion is in the hands of the bourgeoisie, and newspapers with a surname will not publish it at all. Moreover, Earl Hall is a banker and a big capitalist, which is even less likely to cause any damage. Third, in the original work, all the king's princes pursued Audrey. How could the protagonist, the son of an earl, be better than the prince? If they want to marry, they will also choose a big noble of the same level. It is ridiculous that a mere newspaper public opinion wants to marry Earl Hall. Fourth, assuming that public opinion really had an impact on Hall, as a staunch supporter of the Church of the Night, it would be easy for the Earl to ask the church to take action to calm the public opinion. Fifth, OOC Audrey, she would never marry a stranger.

Klein is too miserable. The protagonist should be the Lord of Mysteries, and let Klein enjoy the happiness of being the Ageless Witch.

All I can say is that this opening is too stupid. Even if the deus ex machina says that this is the result of the protagonist's last wish before traveling through time, which was caused by the distortion of the power of the source of matter, it is more reliable than the protagonist's hilarious incitement to public opinion. There is no need to raise the issue of whether he will be found out. Just what he said, about manipulating the market, is worth mentioning in the past 100 years. What does it mean to mention the British in the Victorian era? Even if you say that someone is abusing workers, people have to ask first what age you are referring to. If it is less than five years old, it may be a little too much. If it is higher than this number, then it is better not to bring it up. As for the poor, their families are ruined? Isn't that because they don't work hard enough? One of the purposes of the workhouse I led was to make life worse than death for them. After all, if the people in the workhouse could live like human beings, wouldn't they be regarded as a paradise by the workers on the production line🤭

The beginning of the story feels OOC. The protagonist can easily influence Count Jean Hall and make him ask his daughter, even for his opinion. To reach this point is a bit too exaggerated and too simple. The count himself knows the mysterious power. I vaguely remember that in the original work, he knew a Sequence 3 or 4 bishop. The risk for the protagonist to do this is too great. In particular, there are self-created sequences. Once noticed by a high sequence, they can easily be destroyed as an external god force. And to be honest, I don't quite understand the protagonist's purpose. Is it for the resources of the Count's family, friendship in the dark night, and to get involved with Tarot? But it's not enough. The protagonist's family is not much worse than Earl Hall. Klein's stock is bound to skyrocket and needs investment. He can use Tarot Club. It's hard to say whether it is good or bad to appear in the eyes of the night too early. And the protagonist can only bring losses to Hall at most, but these losses are not enough within a reasonable range. Audrey can reject the protagonist just like she rejected the prince. And if the loss is really big, firstly, there will be an investigation, and secondly, the prince still likes Audrey, and the royal family will not reject Earl Hall. And this kind of behavior is really vulnerable to retaliation. If the author's method of writing the protagonist was inspired by Audrey, it would not be easy to apply. First, Audrey attacked her own family. Second, it was no longer weak at that time. Third, the situation was special at that time. But in short, let's just wait and see for now. There's nothing particularly bad about it. Let's wait until it's on the shelves first.

After reading Chapter 15, I can only say that they are all inferior works in the fandom. The only outstanding one may be the engagement at the beginning? But the author doesn't know how to describe women, let alone emotions. It's rare to see a mysterious fan write something so white.

Sequence Nine Ordinary People After taking the potion, the trajectory of my destiny will undergo subtle changes. Without the influence of a high level (at least Sequence Four), I will coincidentally miss all extraordinary connections. Unless I or the other party intentionally contact each other, it is possible to achieve a reasonable and clear plan and strict execution; Without my awareness, the extraordinary influence or extraordinary items received will be random. Invalid, the greater the personality difference, the smaller the probability; People with disabilities or mental problems will return to normal physical and mental conditions after taking it, and the same is true in life. No matter how poor, rich or powerful they are, they will be regarded as "ordinary people" generally considered by society; I can consciously lower my sense of existence and blend in with the ordinary people more easily. Sequence 8 Dreamer The spirituality of dreamers has been unprecedentedly improved, and they are extremely resistant to abnormal dreaming, channeling, hypnosis, suggestion, etc.; For dreamers, physical hibernation can be regarded as rest, and the spirit can choose to stay awake or rest in the dream. The spirituality required to stay awake is far less than the recovery speed of physical hibernation. However, after the spiritual energy is exhausted, it still needs to be recovered through mental hibernation; The dreamer can reappear a certain scene in the dream (the generation of the scene involves the spiritual world, so the scene is real and objective, equivalent to some form of memory divination), and deduce the cause of the event or predict the possible future development through the control of the dream. Sequence Seven Martial Artist Martial artist's physical fitness will be improved. Martial arts-related learning abilities such as fighting, bodywork, or human joints will also be significantly improved. The methods of using weapons are all martial arts, and any "weapon" that has not been used before. Not only refers to conventional hot and cold weapons, but any object that can be used for attack is a weapon, including fists, feet and other body parts. Martial artists can deconstruct and master its usage, and use it in conjunction with sequence eight abilities to maximize its application in current battles.

Marry Miss Justice first and then fall in love. I just love to see this mouth! 😍

Secret: Cuckolding Audrey at the beginning

Why did I propose to Audrey at the beginning but the love line was all for Forsi

Why didn't you Sinclair show up? His family was killed by a mysterious cyborg woman on Christmas Day and then developed ptsd ()