
Japan's Warring States Period: the Ambition of the Great God Tosa Ichijo
日本战国:土佐一条大神的野望
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Foreign History
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- 3d ago
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- Qidian
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Finally, I started to write Gongqingwen. The ultimate goal of writing Gongqingwen in the Warring States Period was to restore the royal government.
Ichiichi is the daimyo who can truly combine public and military affairs. The monkey one is really just amusing himself. In the end, the public and military families no longer regard the Toyotomi family as their own.
There are too many grammatical errors, and there are many grammatical errors in large paragraphs, which is actually correct. The names of various places in Japan and the visual acuity of each party are not very clear, and there are so many grammatical errors that sometimes you can't understand what is being said. In addition, when writing, I like to write that the protagonist is in a meeting and evaluating someone.
The protagonist is not suitable for marriage with Oda
Marry Oda Ichi as the head wife, a typical small head controlling the big head. In the middle period of this book at the latest, if the protagonist wants to intervene in the recent past, he will inevitably conflict with Nobunaga of Shangluo. Nobunaga is a typical person who employs people from the front and does not use people from the back. But Oda City is close to the Oda family at heart, and at most she is a concubine.
Too wordy
I subscribed to the latest chapter, but I don't plan to renew it. The main reason is that the writing is too verbose! ! !
Just pretend that you are a pure modern liberal arts student. You can leave the Internet and have no understanding of technology. God will corrode you. If you want to attack the street, just say so.
The Ichijo family was born into a noble family. There were basically no capable ministers or generals in Fudai. Even diplomats with outstanding etiquette were not there. How could they be invincible?
One after another, very good, very good
A few years ago, I followed a one-line drama called Eunuch Xiangwen. I hope this one will be more complete ()
The topic selection is good, but the content and writing techniques need to be improved.
Originally, there weren't many books about Japan's Warring States Period, most of them were about Oda, and I didn't want to read them. This book's topic selection is good, but the writing is too messy and complicated, the strength is not concrete, and it feels not neat enough. The starting book "I Became a Daiming in Japan" will be more compact and can be used as a reference. The combat part and part of the strategy content of his free content are directly adapted from the Japanese movie "Puppet City".
It feels a bit too bad to start Shikoku. The only way out may be to copy the Miyoshi family's path and occupy the Osaka Plain. Without control of a large plain, it would be almost difficult to unify Japan's ranks.
My word choice and sentence formation are poor, and my writing skills are not good. After reading a few paragraphs, I can't figure out what it means.
There are too many typos and illogical sentences, and it seems to have been published without any corrections. In the latest chapters, the preface and the following sentences do not match up several times. The advantage is that it proves that it is not AI, but this benefit will not be available in the future.
Yuanqin black fans
Motochika is not as good as Oyamada in Tokaido 😐. It is best not to sleep too much at night when a person like this is a bannerman. Can you not accept it?
How big is the male protagonist's territory now? Is it just Tosa?
Author, have you saved enough manuscripts?
Don't stop looking at it. Where are you in your outline? In the end, even if I can't continue writing, it's good to have an outline.
Author, what books did you mainly refer to for the situation in Tosa Kingdom at that time?
I love watching as long as the Japanese are killed.
The protagonist must have a sense of presence
As the protagonist, you need to have enough presence. The protagonist has popped up several times in the past few days.
Give some suggestions
I have been reading to the latest, and the overall impression now is that everything should be written in detail regardless of priority. Let me give two examples: 1. When writing reflections, it is like a suspense article, with ideas, basis, all possible situations and the final conclusion. As a reader of historical articles, I only need to know the conclusion and basis. I don't care at all how the protagonist analyzes it. 2. When writing a joint battle, the description of the enemy is as detailed as the protagonist's, and there is too much science popularization and repeated analysis of the status of the enemy and ourselves, as if watching a documentary.