I Am Lord Xinling

You have become Lord Xinling and you still don't think of a way to usurp the throne?

I heard that virtuous people in ancient times would give away their money on the fourth day of every week to prevent the people from suffering. If you give golden chicken to other children, it is because your children also like to eat it. If you give sweet black water to other old people to drink, it is because you think that your old people also like to drink it. How wise, ancients! With such a sage, everyone can give fifty yuan to others, everyone can eat meat, and society will become harmonious. What a sage!

Otherwise, the Kingdom of Wei will be doomed, and he will always stop you from behind. Either the eldest brother accidentally fell into the water and died, or his achievements shocked the master and forced the eldest brother to send troops to fight you. Then you had to fight back and replace him, imprisoning him forever.

After reading Chapter 50, my personal feeling is that I can accept the author using some idioms that are not in line with the times, but it is difficult to accept the author using some wrong names, such as common people. In the context, I think the author should be talking about the lowest group of people, which at that time should be called Qian Shou or Tu Li. The reason why it is difficult to accept is as follows: Even though many idioms have not yet appeared during the Warring States Period, they are rhetorical tools and are essentially "metaphors". As a modern person, the author cannot completely use vocabulary that only appeared at that time. Readers will automatically translate and will not really think that the Warring States people spoke idioms from later generations. But the common people are different. At that time, the common people were not the lowest class, but the surnames of hundreds of officials. They were clearly distinguished from slaves, savages and the like. The author used common people for the lowest class people in the dialogues he wrote, which was very unreasonable and logically wrong at the time. Social structure, as the skeleton of history, is the core of historical literature. The historical quality of historical texts is very important. As historical texts, you can fictionalize some events and plots, but you cannot arbitrarily distort the social structure. Calling the bottom class people at that time is equivalent to erasing the huge gap between social classes at that time, which will make the foundation of historical texts even more false. That's about it. Please correct me if I'm wrong. I just have my thoughts and I'm not criticizing anything...🤔

If you don't usurp the throne, Wei will be in trouble

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As in the title 😍😍😍

19 Years old, really young. Go and ask a professional for advice. Especially talk to your editor. Editors have read more books and mentored more authors than you. They know what the data in your book means and whether there is a market for your writing style. If you keep your head down and think about it, you will easily get into trouble. Ask people who have experienced it, you won't be at a disadvantage. Let me be honest about the achievements of this book. Could have been better. If you don't put it on the shelves at the climax, the number of subscriptions will not increase. This is a very real problem. What I'm writing now is just too much plot, and the length is too short. Readers will leave without saving enough, so naturally they have no motivation to follow it. It's not that your story isn't good, it's that the rhythm and timing aren't right. But actually, it's okay for you to continue writing. Didn't you say you would publish new books in the future? Then you can write this book slowly, just practice writing. Old readers like me will take care of it first, and I won't rush you. Anyway, if you are still here and your pen is not broken, you will have a chance. Everyone's living conditions are different, I understand. But preparing for exams is preparing for exams, and writing is writing. Let's not talk about seeing your new book in the historical area next year. What you have to do is to insist on doing one thing well. Not everyone is reading material. And with the current economic environment, coupled with artificial intelligence and automation, it may be better for you to think clearly about the future direction. All I can say is that the assembly line has no future. Actually, I don't think you have thought carefully before you surrender now. Since you still have 10,000 words of saved manuscripts, you can actually update it and try out the reaction. Don't make the decision for your readers, they understand eunuch matters better than you think. No matter which path you choose in the end, stick to it. I'm not telling you to stick to writing. I mean, whether you choose to prepare for exams, technical school, or writing, once you choose, go for it seriously. Now that you are still young, you want to seek stability and buy yourself insurance, which is correct. But you have to remember that you can't have your cake and eat it too. It's like digging a well. If you dig here and there, you will never find water. One last thing to remind you. If you really open a new book in the future, remember to come back here and let me know when you open a new chapter. There may not necessarily be many old readers, but there are always a few who are still waiting. No need to promise anything. How can everything in the world be perfect? We still don't quite understand your actual situation, so we can only wish you good luck.

Nowadays, most novels write dialogues, and they want to cram the meaning into one sentence, but then they forget it after reading it. This author chose not to go that route. He uses a semi-retro style of writing. How about a semi-retro method? The language itself is fluent vernacular, there is no reading threshold, and it is not difficult to read. But that temperament and rhythm came from history books. You see when he writes about ministers persuading the king, he does not directly say "what I think should be done", but like the lobbyist in "Zuo Zhuan", he first tells an allusion - "I have heard that there was a country in the past...", Uses the story as an introduction, and uses layers of questioning to pave the way, and finally reveals the true intention. The best thing about this technique is that it uses modern sentences to surpass the imagination of the ancients. The language is current and readers can understand it at a glance. But the way of thinking is ancient. This kind of writing is not something that can be written casually. The author has obviously thought deeply about and digested the dialogue logic of history books, so that he can use that kind of texture into the vernacular text, which is not stiff but has weight. In the midst of a bunch of straight-forward conversations, suddenly seeing this kind of writing that pays attention to rhythm, foreshadowing, and subtext is like eating a table of fine dishes, leaving the fragrance in your teeth and cheeks. Definitely worth recommending to fellow fans.

Why are there more than 100 chapters and they haven't been released yet?