The World of the Extreme Path: Tempering My Body Through Terror

After it was put on the shelves, it suddenly became "Go away". All the divine pattern families came out. After the settings of the aristocratic family and Weirdness came out, Chi Bang couldn't explain why the characters on Chi Bang could survive for seventy or eighty years except that they were all black gloves. Go away and write something so illogical and still be read by a lot of people because he has already completed his early accumulation of fans. How many people can you think are willing to pay for such a big hole? (I jumped to subscribe after it was put on the shelf and my fan value was within 200)

At least such plots are relatively rare in martial arts literature. If you are a pure newcomer, I think it is okay. At least the writing is smooth and it can be regarded as gold mining.

The outline is basically written later, and some plots can be interspersed. Do you like to watch ghost missions, watch daily practice, or watch the interaction between Dian and warriors?

In a world filled with ghosts and monsters, it is nonsense to talk about any identity. A city has become like that. Do you still need to do superficial work? I am strong enough to be direct. I don't eat beef. I really can't fight guerrilla warfare. The protagonist is not afraid of Yin Qi.

Is this an unlucky constitution? Everywhere I go, people write about this. How many people still like it now?

There are only over 1 million people in Jiangnan Province. There must be something wrong with this setting. If the population is small, productivity will not be good. How can it be possible to support so many martial arts practitioners and kill them all in just a few hits every day?

The plot is quite speechless. The knocker is in the protagonist's house. Why don't you go look for it yourself? There are also demon meat and elixirs that are necessary for martial arts training. If you don't eat these, will the protagonist not increase his strength?

This setting and social background are written in a vague way, just like the game map, there is no logical generation. According to what the author has written so far, the place where the protagonist lives now is like an isolated island, with no external flow at all and a completely closed island environment. You, the author, need to explain your social background well. You should slowly start writing about it. Even now, it's still the same. You wouldn't think that explaining the five alliances would reflect the social background. This can only be said to be the end of the dynasty, and then the geographical location and overall social environment are empty.

The horror part is well written, but there are too many stereotypical villains.

I feel like the beginning is too big. The Novice Village will encounter a strange thing that changes the will of a large number of people, and then it will be an old-fashioned organization. There is a high probability that it will collapse later.