Starting from American Comics and Becoming the Mastermind Behind the Scenes

I'm not giving you a small suggestion, that is, don't always praise it too much. This is a common problem with every kind of writing, such as Eternal River, Reversal of Time, etc. The more you write, the more rubbish you write, and don't make other people's writing particularly low. This is also the key, don't make every template look too monotonous.

Don't talk about going home all the time. Of course you can make going home your goal, but don't stress about it all the time.

What a scum under one person, a bunch of little Karami who can't survive modern thermal weapons.

Setting up the bond before time travel is a real failure

Looks good. When will organizations like Protective Umbrella and Secret Files come on the scene? Don't always be Chinese-style and try something from overseas.

Isn't it a pure area under one person? Lu Ci was picked up and beaten by a pair of ordinary people for several days and nights.

The writing is generally poor and the characters are seriously homogeneous.

Is there a Shennong? How is this book?

Dead people, other similar behind-the-scenes wars between good and evil resulted in zero casualties on both sides. No one can die. If your book has hundreds of thousands of words and doesn't die, I won't read it. If there is death or exit, I will subscribe. What I'm talking about is permanent retirement, not the kind where you get injured, then go back to China to recuperate, and then come back after a while. I can understand if you don't want to die. You're like the guys from the Defenders. They sacrifice one or two highlights. It's useless to leave the game and die. There's no need to give them too much ink. Of course, this is my personal opinion. It's up to you whether you adopt it or not.

The Horse Talisman was cut too hard!

I'm tired of watching group portraits that always hide behind the scenes and harvest emotional value. The protagonist Li Ang occasionally comes out to join in the fun, eat melons, and open a harem to recruit girls? . To accept or not to accept Spider-Woman - Gwen, Scarlet Witch, Flicker, White Queen Frost, Psylocke, Jean Grey, Phantom Cat, Rugrats, Polaris, 😍😍Hey

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 6, so I let it out before I left. Behind the scenes flow route. Summon a virtual character, then perform the role, and gain shock value. In short, you have to keep doing things and doing things. The first five chapters summoned two virtual characters, Ren Wo Xing and Yan Shuangying. But what about what is shown in the novel? The fighting scenes are crude, the showmanship is awkward, and the appearance of Hands and Money and SHIELD is extremely low. (Jin Bin jumps out directly to find trouble.) Yan Shuangying appears to save the bald socialite and the blind man. (Seriously, although I know that in this case, some main characters and supporting characters will definitely survive, but this is too cliché. Why not just write the bald courtesan and Daredevil to death in the first 10 chapters of the novel, which is refreshing and suddenly has the feeling of the golden three.) Let Me Go is in Tsui Hark's version of the movie, an enhanced version of the magical star-absorbing magic, which can suck people into sex. And because the protagonist was imprisoned by the Hand before he got the golden finger, he is his mortal enemy. If you follow the normal logic to deduce the writing method, there is actually a lot that can be written. For example, the protagonist escapes and is walking down the street with no money or identity to buy some hot dogs. Then he discovered the clues through Ren Woxing's internal power, and calmly pretended to expose the hot dog sellers and people around him. (You can replace the famous scenes in Gu Long's novels where a killer ambush the protagonist and then is exposed and kills him with American comics.) Then there is a fierce battle scene. You can make a certain magic modification of the battle scene in Tsui Hark's version of Swordsman. The battle designer has it in the movie. Finally, Shou Hehui recovered the body and reported to Mrs. Gao. (Find a few American medical dramas, such as Bones, and then intercept and copy the medical terminology in them to describe how incredible it is to turn a person into a mummy, and why we think this mummy is his corpse. The more serious and professional the better.) Then Mrs. Gao pretended to be mysterious and deep, and said a few words about Kunlun, Qi, etc. When the reporting staff finally relaxed and went back, some information was revealed through conversations with people in the base. (Copied from some spy movies.) Revealing that the person he was talking to was an agent of S. H. I. E. L. D., Or an undercover agent of other underworld organizations, wouldn't this bring out other forces as well!

There are too many characters and they are too complicated. Several may pop up in one chapter, and some appearances are purely redundant. The redundant characters not only occupy the space for a good portrayal of a certain character, but also make people tired and confused. Moreover, even if there is very little ink on a character, people can still tell at a glance that the version is wrong. This may also be a kind of talent.

Stop thinking about going home every day...

Although the magnitude is not high under one person, there are many mechanisms. The light space system has the bite sac, Fengshayan's space system ability can escape thousands of miles, and the Gao family's two-dimensional magical path

Brother, Marvel has DC Comics

After reading six chapters, I really have collected all the poisonous points.

It's a novice, the kind where you can tell everything just by looking at the chapter names.

Are some of the things you write here intended to be funny? Some of your characters are very loose and inexplicable. You can make the characters a little bit more funny, but the problem is that you can't make the characters flat and loose.

Moreover, these things summoned by the protagonist are really not on the table, and they cannot even enter the super fluid space. The role of the mastermind behind the scenes should be the following: Cyttorak, also known as the Lord of Annihilation , the Crimson Lord, first appeared in the 12th issue of "X-Men". He is an ancient entity from outside the multiverse. He is described as both a god and a demon. Cyttorak is omniscient and omnipotent in his own field and can modify reality. Erasing the timeline, creating life, giving abilities, shaping bodies, and unlimited magic. Cyttorak once erased one-fifth of the Phoenix Power, kidnapped Galactus and Doctor Strange, defeated the old cosmic gods, and ignored the influence of the Infinity Stones. Marvel official executives have made it clear that Cyttorak is stronger than Shuma-Gorath and Zom Shuma-Gorath, first appeared in "Marvel" Premiere" Issue 10, is an ancient and mysterious extra-dimensional demon, the Old One who rules hundreds of dimensions. He is considered to be one of the original primitive forces of Chaos. It is said that he is the greatest existence among the Old Ones. Abilities include: being almost omniscient and omnipotent in one's own domain, manipulating reality, manipulating magic, necromancy, immortality, invincibility, regeneration, telepathy, energy projection, morphological changes, huge mysterious energy, etc. Dormammu admits that Shuma-Glass's status and power are above his own. Mephisto and Satanish are like "rats in the great temple" in Shuma-Glass's secondary realm. Shuma-Glass and Veshandi are eternal enemies. Tiger God, who first appeared in "Deadly Hands of Kung Fu" #19 (November 1975) and fully appeared in "Avengers Academy" #36, is an ancient god that symbolizes human primitive fear. It is the binary opposite of the Phoenix Force. It is a conceptual-level existence that is the embodiment of fear itself. Tiger God once defeated Shuma-Gorath, assists Black Panther in dismantling Logos (an abstract entity, the fusion of the Lord of Order and the Lord of Chaos), fights the Phoenix in the White Heat Chamber, and cures the infection of multi-eternity. Vishanti was mentioned for the first time in the 116th issue of "Strange Stories" and appeared physically in the 5th issue of "Marvel Premiere". It consists of the almighty Osamuto, the all-seeing Agamotto, and the old Hogs. Vishanti is a white man. The absolute source of magic is the greatest trinity of mysterious entities in the multiverse. Although none of them individually have obvious multiverse properties, when the trinity is united, it is more powerful than most cosmic-level entities. From the ancient times of the earth, Emperor Weishan has helped mankind to fight against the snake god Set, the god of dark magic, Chthon, and the Great Old One thrived under the threat of Shuma-Gorath, the cubic life form dwarfed by such great entities as the god Veshandi. Set, also known as Serpent God, one of the four Elder Gods One of the Gods), first appeared in "Sub-Mariner" #9. Set's power far exceeds that of most gods and can never be destroyed. Set was the initiator of the first murder on Earth, which triggered the ancient God-Eating War. Set's crown, Oshutu's The sword, Sithorne's magic mirror or scepter, and Gaia's rose respectively represent the four elements of water, wind, fire, and earth, which together form the cornerstone of Marvel's earth magic system. Set is positioned at the same level as Weishan Emperor and the Beholder, and Set represents a link in the balance of the multiverse. Chthon, also translated as Sithorn, first appeared in "Marvel Chillers" #1 (1975), and officially appeared as Chthon in "Avengers" #186, also known as Great Shadow, Lord of Darkness (Dark) Master), the God of Chaos, one of the four ancient gods, the first master of black magic on earth, and the author of the Book of Darkness. Chthon is the source of black magic. Even Dormammu and Mephisto have borrowed his magic power. Chthon once used Quicksilver's body to come, triggering a reality-level crisis. Eternity claims that Chthon is a terrible cancer. Atum, also known as God-Eater, Demogorge, the son of Ra, Gaea and Demiurge, first appeared in "Thor Annual" #10, Atum represents the supreme male authority, logic and primitive power. He is the god of creation, the sun and fertility. He was created to destroy the "demons" (the fallen ancient gods of the earth). Incarnated as Demogorg, the God-Eater, Atum has physical power that far exceeds that of most gods. It can absorb and devour other gods and demons, is immortal, and controls and projects huge energy. Atum is stronger than almost all gods and demons on the earth. Odin Borson, also known as the Allfather, Lord of Asgard, Almighty Father, Asgardian, first appeared in the 85th issue of "Journey Into Mystery", Odin rules Asgard and the Nine Realms Realms), Odin can manipulate time and space, distort reality, destroy the structure of the multiverse, and fight against cosmic threats such as innity, planet devourers, and the Celestials. In addition there is Dormammu Amatsu-Mikaboshi

The rest is okay, but the grade of the things drawn out is too random and there is no standard. The silver black shadow ninja is much stronger than most gold ones.

To put it bluntly, those great masters are state banquet chefs who know how to innovate and research and develop Those of you who write fan stories just make pre-made dishes, put together some prepared ingredients and prepared characters, and stir-fry them in a pot, so that the taste is not overpowering! I'm really curious. You clearly smelled of AI in front of you, but you stupidly created a clown and then wiped it out immediately. The protagonist's character is difficult to break down, there is no driving force, and there is only an empty home hanging in his mouth Why does Chu Xuan appear in the latest few pictures? Do you have to find an intelligent character to do blind operations for you and patch it up? But in fact, the upper limit of your intelligence is the upper limit of his intelligence, and in the end, only a lump will come out Chu Xuan himself is a so-called "wise man" who shoots arrows first and then draws the target, and reads the script first and then completes the process. Is he really popular? Is his role really easy for you to use? What follows must be a bunch of subterfuge operations, which are far-fetched and outrageous, and then cause shock to Stark and Nick Fury Oh! This person is so thoughtful and smart. He has anticipated everything. How amazing! You still think it was 10 years ago. 10 Years ago, you thought the routine was lame, but now you will only be sprayed with blood. You really feel that your grades are too good The writing in the book next door is okay. Aizen was put in the early stage and it is more in line with the character. It is a bit tough. Once the early stage is over, it is hidden immediately Why do you think? Is that author stupider than you? Are you extremely smart and highly skilled? Can Chu Xuan be cooked in a pot of hodgepodge, stewed and rotten, and low-quality pre-made dishes prepared to the level of a state banquet? Either delete Chu Xuan and replace him with a character who can invent. Stop using a wise man and a character known for his IQ to run the show and patch up your lame story. I just came here to read cool articles and read fan fiction. I don't have much expectations for your abilities anymore, but at least you have some self-knowledge. If you hesitate to put other characters in, if you write Chu Xuan, I can directly give you a death notice for this book.

Why not give the time-travel protagonist a pregnant wife who grew up in a single-parent family?

I haven't read Dragon Clan and I'm not interested in the recent chapters, so I'll retreat for a while.

Li Ang? ? ? One of the top bosses in the world! ? ?

I thought about a previous book that also summoned characters from other worlds. It made Iron Man drink the water of the Daughter Kingdom and gave birth to a daughter 7 days later. He also put on a Loki mask and used a rat charm to bring the Statue of Liberty to life and then mentally controlled the superhero to hold a concert. I forgot everything about the title of the book, but I did not forget the plot.

If you dare to write a book of infinite horror, you will be immediately disappointed.

It's okay. I suggest you read it first before talking about it. It's not as bad as the comment section says, and it has more than sixty chapters and it's not charged, so it's pretty good.

Are there any similar books? Please recommend 🙂