The Immortal Clan Starts from Writing the Genealogy

The development is natural, without so many routines and coincidences. In terms of family description, each character also reflects his own role and value, rather than a simple name and identity.

The pace is too slow. People who watch it at first can absorb it, but when it comes to the follow-up stage, it becomes very torturous.

The 3 monthly tickets are actually the sponsors of this month?

It looks very comfortable, but the pace is too slow. After practicing Qi, I feel no different from ordinary people. There are no spells and no need for spiritual stones.

It's pretty good, but the pace has sped up a bit. My health is still not good now. I have to write about when I will retire.

The writing is okay, but you need to read it more calmly. The progress is slow, mainly because this cultivation of immortality is treated as if there is no cultivation at all. Goldfinger also disappears after the protagonist practices.

Your book is well written. Really. It's called slow-burning. It's definitely a high-quality book.

This introduction is written too much like a cool article. In fact, it seems that the days are passing by and getting better little by little.

Very well written! A small suggestion is to explain where the paper in the protagonist's home comes from. Because I always use paper to write down things, I have to write down everything. It feels like I can't run out of paper. I haven't seen any mention of buying paper, and there is no reason for it in the article. It feels like it just appeared out of thin air. Considering the protagonist's family background and ancient cultivation background, pens, ink, paper and inkstones should be quite expensive for the current family. According to the usage of "Keeping Notes" in the article, the protagonist's family may not be able to afford it. If the paper is purchased, it should be written down in the expenses. If the protagonist's father keeps it, then he should also explain it. There will be a time when it is used up, rather than always being available, which makes people feel like it is never used up. Because the bits and pieces of daily income and expenses you wrote are quite detailed, I have questions about this.

Zhujiao has not written about his family's spiritual practice since he officially started practicing spiritual practice. The family members also did not mention feeling qi. I guess they don't have any spiritual qualifications. I hope they don't suddenly become geniuses again! Life is really passing day by day, right? Is this pace too slow?

I don't understand why I can't cast a monthly vote.

After reading two chapters, I already feel very emotional. The author must not write a cool article. The slower the pace, the better 🙂

The writing is very good, not impatient or impatient, and it is told in a smooth manner. Very comfortable to read!

It's very smooth. Although it is slow to get up, it is very practical step by step and makes people feel at ease.

A slow-burning novel that reads very naturally. If you like a slow pace, you can read it. Highly recommended.

It's really good, and I enjoyed reading it. Full of heat, mortal flow, and warmth. Come on, ten-year-old bookworm, I recommend it.

Personally I think it's okay. It just heats up slowly, too slowly. I only started to learn about immortality after about 50 pictures. They are all short-sighted. Although the writing is very good, I don't know if others can accept it. People tend to read fast-paced and refreshing articles.

The writing is good, plain and simple, nothing too exciting, but it is attractive enough to read. This is a good slow-burn article. However, while reading the article, I also had a feeling, that is, "slowly written articles really need to be sustained." Because it is plain and simple, if you only read two chapters a day, the temperature will be a cup of cold water, and you will not drink it after a few cups. You have to grow to a length of 50 or 100 to feel like drinking hot water and experience the meaning of reading this book. But I just read and follow up on the book. I think there are only a few people who automatically subscribe to the book. If you subscribe too much, the author will really die () A very contradictory question, but the writing is really good. It would be better if the "line pad" can be changed... Come on, author 👍