Under Turmoil

The title of this book is poorly written. Then the pace in the early stage was too slow, and the first battle was delayed until Chapter 6. I don't understand what the author was thinking and why he wrote such a delayed pace. The content of the writing is okay, but I don't know why the characters' names are chosen that way. It's okay after I read it. Wait until chapter 20 or 30 before starting to work hard, a strange writing method. Although everyone says there are three golden chapters to read in today's world, the author at that time, remember that you were a small author, not a big author like Cuttlefish. You must have written conflicts in the early stage, and then you have to write something that can retain readers, otherwise no one will read it. So far, I don't think many people have read this book. I can only say, uh, that's it, come on, but it looks like you haven't been able to sign the contract eitherah

In fact, I feel that Chapters 34 to 40 are very well written, and the mechanism of putting things in order is very creative, and there are also highlights of the protagonist, which can be regarded as one of the few highlights of the protagonist. Then many supporting characters are displayed here, with multiple aspects, instead of just labeling them, they are expanded a lot. Anyway, I think these chapters are the best in the whole book so far, and the others cannot compare to these few chapters.

I am chovy, the author, you wrote for me so well! What does it mean that the male protagonist has a 15-year-old wife? Do you know what you are writing? Ah? I'm really not afraid of being banned. You... Oh, my God, what are you doing?