From Strategic Consultant to Invader of the Peninsula Entertainment Industry

The writing is so realistic, and it can be seen that a lot of information has been researched, but the progress is too slow. Do you want to write a long novel? There is too much foreshadowing, and the reading experience is not strong. I think it will be better to save books to read.

Kahuang: I'm really not a sweet girl

Can we add a heroine Seohyun? Don't have too many heroines. At most five or six are enough to hold up the sky. Any more will be pure bulldozers.

I've read nearly 30 chapters, focusing on this Zheng brand issue. I don't think there is any need to waste so many chapters on this matter. Let's be more vigorous and decisive. Let's talk about the pros and cons directly. There is no need to talk so much. How much she knew about an idol in that era was nothing more than the amount of profit and the amount of money. She has not entered the society, has struggled in business, and has not gone to business school or anything like that (Ang just has no culture and no ideas). If you ask the protagonist to tell her some business operation logic knowledge, what can she understand? Too many chapters will only make the eyes tired. Most people who watch Korean entertainment come to see this 😅 just to see the love entanglement between the protagonist and the idol. Your whole business... Can't retain people.

The dialogue looks a bit weird, it smells like AI in a short drama dialogue. It's my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Kim Taeyeon: I'm Just a Soft Girl

It's hard to imagine that a group of women would cross the line when they first met someone who was introduced by a company agent and was obviously a member of the company's management. The author obviously has never worked. I don't know what the first reaction of a migrant worker is when he meets such a young person with connections. When a migrant worker encounters an employer or leader with whom he has an obvious relationship, his first reaction is always don't look at me, don't look for me. It's impossible to be curious about a strange leader like in an idol drama, and it's even less likely to start a fight when the other person hasn't left. Isn't this making yourself uncomfortable?

It would be much harder to write about traditional Korean entertainment without golden fingers.

This is not an investment in JYP. The stock price of Frappuccino in 2014 was doubled by the time Twice debuted two years ago.

The writing is pretty good, but the pace is a bit slow. It seems very bland and I don't have much desire to follow it. I may need to give it a try.