Water Margin: The Shrine in the Snowstorm, Why Should I Take the Blame?

Don't I understand why the protagonist is pulling Gao Qiu's skin? This matter will be revealed sooner or later, and Lu Qian and others have not returned for half a month or a month. Lin Chong has not been killed here, so he will definitely send someone over again! Is the protagonist going to give up his official status and take Lin Chong to Liangshan at this time? If so, what's the point of these 20 chapters talking about Gao Qiu's leather-clad tiger? If not, how could the protagonist pull off this lie? A middle-aged person who has been in the officialdom for more than ten or twenty years will never be stupid enough to see through it. Gao Qiu obviously wants to kill Lin Chong. If you protect Lin Chong and let him continue in Cangzhou, something will definitely happen, so it doesn't make any sense. You, a low-ranking official, are facing Gao Qiu in the officialdom. That's like a kindergarten kid challenging a college student. You're going to challenge him with your head.

Goldfinger pointed it out a little late. I am a book reader and I was looking for the next book to change. I just heard Goldfinger appeared and didn't cancel the book. Otherwise, I would have missed the book. I suggest you mention Goldfinger in the introduction. Your Goldfinger combined with the background of Water Margin is a very strong selling point. The traffic drainage effect is much better when written in the introduction than now.

The book is a good book, the author's writing is first-rate, and the plot is good, but the writing of Water Margin lacks the philistine core of Water Margin.

Make a little suggestion, just a little bit, and pretend you didn't see anything inappropriate. At present, there is no problem with the overall three views of the book. When writing a book, you must first establish your intention, and when reading, you must first taste it. A novel must be mixed with the author's subjective thoughts, especially this kind of masterpiece. It is better to say that it is a reflection of the book than to express the thoughts after reading it. And when readers read this kind of book, they are just looking for resonance. An understanding of the character's encounters, personality, and attitude towards life, as well as content that wants to correct the feeling of not following one's own will. So far, there is no major problem with the author's writing. The only minor problem is that it is not satisfying enough. Understand that each person has his own way of writing. This kind of writing is not so straightforward, but it is straight to the point. Occasionally, it is okay to take a sideways approach. But this is Water Margin, and I think the focus should still be there. Just like cutting a melon, you can cut it vertically and horizontally, but the number of portions you divide is the same. Don't mess up the order because of your knife skills. It is difficult to write a group portrait article, and it is even more difficult to write a masterpiece. Once you have tasted it, the taste will be strong and quiet when you think about it again. But if the author dares to write, he is great, regardless of whether it is good or bad. But group portrait writing is not about the world, characters, geography, history, or encyclopedia under a microscope. There is no need to be so meticulous that you can analyze and criticize everything down to the last detail. If one sentence can reflect the psychological activities of the character, there is no need to analyze the psychological activities. If an action can explain the logic of the character's action, there is no need to analyze why he lifts his feet and kicks his legs. If one thing can be explained objectively, the cause and effect can be clarified, and there is no need to repeat the case to bring it into reality. In short, writing a book retains six points of meaning, and drawing a picture retains nine points of whiteness. The beauty lies in imagination.

Modern people who catch colds, colds and coughs will get worse and even die in this icy and snowy environment. What kind of King of Endurance is this protagonist?

Chapter 47 The pace is so slow

The author doesn't look like a newbie, this writing is so good

Although the pace is a bit slow, it can still be said to be eloquent without overloading the plot. Looks very comfortable

Good books are food for me

It's not enough. I finished reading it in one day.