Red Gold Dragon: Starting Out as a Ceratosaurus

It's not that we can't accept the protagonist being defeated, but we can't accept the protagonist becoming a clown. Not only did the protagonist's plan to conquer the jackals not be realized, he was mistakenly injured by the jackals until he was about to die and was chased by the jackals. The protagonist almost died as casually as a wild dog on the roadside. Isn't this a clown? The protagonist's wisdom, caution, and force are not reflected at all. Moreover, this book has not even written many exciting points. The main character cheats and always suffers, which is too discouraging. It feels like the main character has become a complete useless clown.

Have you noticed that readers like me, at least, don't accept the protagonist being a clown, but they cannot accept the protagonist being a clown. As long as the protagonist achieves one of the goals he set before getting involved, he won't look so aggrieved. The robbery failed, the dog was confiscated, and the identity was exposed in vain. Next, they had to run away, hiding from the gnolls in the temple and the humans on the trade route who tried every possible means in the previous article not to offend. The only reward was that I was too stupid to plunge into the nuclear explosion zone and try my luck. At first glance, it was a blessing in disguise deliberately arranged by the author. Is any positive feedback here due to the protagonist? The protagonist has all negative effects. He worked on a plan for a long time, and finally tore up the plan and rushed forward, only to be blown up beyond recognition. He showed neither wisdom nor prudence, nor even force. He was a pure clown. There is a book about White Dragon next door that is very good. Even if the protagonist of White Dragon suffers a loss because he is temporarily soft-hearted and not cautious enough, he can save himself by relying on the foreshadowing laid before (instead of forcing his luck like you), and he will take revenge afterwards. The difference between the two books is that you let the protagonist plunge into a dangerous situation that he knows he cannot escape from, while the protagonist next door had a way to escape from the beginning, but he did not expect that he would fall into this dangerous situation. It's equivalent to a person who drives a car without insurance, and after an accident, he relies on the nugget he picked up on the roadside to sell for a lot of money; a person who bought insurance beforehand, and immediately moved out to make up for the loss after the accident. The former gives people a sense of short-lived life, and the latter does not rely on their own ability to make a fortune, but is purely a nouveau riche; the latter may have problems such as rising insurance premiums, but at least it makes readers and the protagonist feel confident no matter what. At least now, your protagonist is just like your supporting role, the Jackal. The incense is burned and the Bodhisattva is offended. They are all fake smart who seem to have made a perfect plan but are actually completely imperfect. They are more disgusting than pure stupidity. At least ordinary stupid people may know that they are stupid, but stupid people who think they are smart are hopeless.

It's a mess of a story. I was almost surpassed by Zilong when I started a game, and later I was chased away like a dog by a jackal. I just like to write a bit of aggrieved plots, right?

Rt, I forgot the reference 🙂

The plot is too fast and too compact, right?

For the black dragon protagonist, I just killed him casually.

For this Clash of Clans, you can just write one page. It's really verbose to write so many words. And if you want Dragon Mian, can't you be faster?

I find the plot of this clan war to be really boring. Even if it was a bit toxic before, at least it was still a plot conflict. Now it's just like boiled water.

It seems that I really want to imitate the power of a dragon, and then join the unlimited flow, but it is very awkward. The protagonist seems to be very strong, but he always can't help himself, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Author, your pacing is really bad. You let Fido have legendary strength so quickly. How much more can be written in this case? Also, the Infinite Streaming Clan Clash is really not good-looking, or the Infinite Streaming Clash of Clans you wrote is not good-looking.