Red Gold Dragon: Starting Out as a Ceratosaurus

We can't accept the protagonist suffering setbacks, but we can't accept him becoming a clown. Not only did his plan to subdue the gnolls fail, but he was also accidentally injured and nearly killed by them, then relentlessly pursued. He almost died on the roadside like a stray dog ​​– what is this if not a clown? His intelligence, caution, and strength were all completely absent.

Have you noticed that, at least for readers like me, it's not that we can't accept the protagonist suffering setbacks, but rather that we can't accept the protagonist becoming a clown? If even one of the protagonist's predetermined goals had been achieved, it wouldn't seem so frustrating. The robbery failed, the dog-catching attempt failed, and his identity was exposed.

It's a mess. He almost got overtaken by Zlong even with a cheat code, and then he got chased like a dog by the gnolls. You just like writing frustrating plots, huh?

As mentioned, I forgot the references 🙂

Isn't the plot moving way too fast and too tightly packed?

The protagonist of the Black Dragon was killed casually.

You only need to write one page for this Clash of Clans article. It's so long and tedious. And if you want to sleep with dragons, can't you just hurry up?

I find the storyline of this tribal war game really boring. Even the previous ones had some flaws, but at least they had some plot conflict. This one is just like plain water.

It's clear they wanted to imitate "The Power of One Dragon" and incorporated the infinite flow element, but it feels awkward. The protagonist seems very strong, but he's always acting against his will, which is a bit frustrating to watch.

Author, your pacing is terrible. You made Fedo a legend so quickly. How much more can you write about now? Also, the infinite flow combined with tribal warfare is really not good, or rather, your version of infinite flow combined with tribal warfare is not good.