The Heroine Is Fierce and Has Indestructible Magic at the Beginning.

Is this indestructible magic power so weak?

It's not like you're writing about a person who just traveled through time and is about to die. His mentality is too good. He knows he's going to die soon. He doesn't think about how to live. He keeps talking nonsense.

After reading less than forty chapters, I felt so suffocated and unfulfilled.

A common problem of classic new authors is that the plot always fails to grasp the key points. The writing is scattered here and there, and the overall view is very scattered and has no sense of substitution. Come on, there is still a lot of room for improvement.

The first chapter is suspected to be AI, and in the second chapter, the supporting character is an idiot seeking death and causing trouble for the male protagonist. Relying on these things to earn royalties from coding at Qidian? You are also overthinking...

The indestructible power of the King Kong is very impressive in any novel. Otherwise, it would be destroyed casually. How would you dare to call the King Kong indestructible?

The writing was pretty good, and it told the story well. The enemies that were not killed in the front were also given corresponding explanations later. It was handled very well, but at the time it still felt a bit depressing and not refreshing enough. From the point of view of refreshing writing, it is not satisfying enough. I feel that my hands are tied. I have obtained the perfection-level magical power, but in the end I still cannot win this one and cannot kill that one. It is understandable that the author needs it for the plot, but it is really uncomfortable to always be like this. Especially when my emotions were pushed to the point where I wanted to kill the opponent immediately, but the result was that I couldn't kill him, and then he was killed casually in a very simple plot later on. It was really frustrating to watch. The invincible flow of Gua wrote the story of the upgrade flow. Overall, it is very good. The author has ideas and wants to write something different.

The strong AI writing style, characters, and plot are very dramatic.

And you still haven't modified the original text after adding the patch, right? Otherwise, why would you just talk about awakening Su Hui in the first place, and then follow up with the original owner one by one? How about a soul-piercing, corpse-resurrecting setting to fight with each other at a glance? Shouldn't normal mean what is happening in this life or this world?

Due to the reaction of many readers, I would like to explain the perfection of the practice in advance. The perfection of martial arts means that under the current cultivation level, the protagonist can exert the maximum power of martial arts. Extreme explanation. Ten years of cultivation to block the sword. A hundred years of cultivation to block guns. Thousands of years of cultivation to block cannons. Thousands of years of cultivation to prevent nuclear bombs.

This book is much better than another book from the same period, Escorting the Widow...

The things given by the system are not valuable and can be given away casually. The system is too exaggerated. If I don't put down my fighting power, I won't be able to write more than a few chapters before it reaches the finale. Will collapse

I read a chapter or two and it seems pretty good, but unfortunately there are too few.

I haven't read a single chapter, but there are four female protagonists in the introduction? ? Awesome! !

The writing is obviously good, but the interaction and the plot are so written that it seems to happen inexplicably and then there is no focus. All I can say is keep working hard

Thank you Shennong, the setting is too rubbish

Why are there so many bad reviews? I think it's fine.

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When the Vajra Divine Art is perfected, why is there no muscle-changing and marrow-cleansing? With a few women, it's just thunder and no rain! Not rigorous, boring

No, everything else has its derivatives. If you don't shoot, shoot, right?

There is no sense of satisfaction, otherwise don't talk about being at full level. As a result, it only gives realm but not cultivation, and you can't see where the protagonist is.

Is it more exciting to reach the full level of martial arts immediately and practice to upgrade?

Why do I feel like my writing is okay, but all the book reviews I read are negative😦

Why hasn't it been updated? I really like this style.

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I've never seen anything so abstract