I Am a Prince in the World of Martial Arts

First of all, congratulations on the launch. Secondly, let's read this book here. I started reading the author's books from Seal of Two Realms. I have finished both The Melon-eating Swordsman and Five Thunders. I read this book as soon as I opened it. In the early stage, it did have the fun of resourceful martial arts, but unfortunately it soon became weak. At present, the three major contents are to explore science and technology, enter the world, and open a harem, each of which has been touched upon briefly. Pantech's achievements were briefly mentioned, but the specific changes they brought about were not detailed enough. It's very awkward to enter the world. The resourcefulness of both the enemy and ourselves is becoming more and more random, full of taken-for-granted plots. The protagonist's strength is only improved in a few strokes, making it unclear what level he is. During the fight, it feels like the author relies entirely on the author to explain why he wins. It's even worse when you open a harem. They're all on the shelves, and you don't even get a chance to take the first bite. Furthermore, the portrayal of female characters is not very good either. Between the two female protagonists, the role of the female champion's brains is taken away too much by the protagonist, resulting in a lack of shining points and only squinting eyes. Qianqian is a demon sect witch, and she doesn't have that seductive feeling at all. The overall effect she shows is that of a low-level green tea who relies on her martial arts skills to play with the protagonist. The other female characters are also lackluster, and people don't look forward to the day when they actually get together with the protagonist. The three major contents go hand in hand. It seems that there are more interesting things to watch, but in fact, there is no clear distinction between the priorities, making people unable to grasp the key points. It feels like the protagonist is moving around with a hammer and a stick, and the fun is scattered. There are also many problems in other places. Personally, I think they are caused by a lack of clarity in the worldview, or in other words, by a confusing worldview. The two world seals and five thunders written by the author before were all about cultivating immortals in other worlds, and the court was weak, so it was basically reduced to the background. Although this book also shows that the court is weak, because the world view is different, and it does not clearly explain how weak the court is, so readers can only imagine on their own, which leads to differences in everyone's understanding of the state of the world. The Jianghu forces in the world of immortality are all monks and demons. They are above the secular world and everyone can understand it. Therefore, it is acceptable for the Jianghu forces to do whatever they want and even ignore the court. But in the martial arts world, the author also allows the Jianghu forces to override the imperial court without giving a convincing reason, so it is difficult to comment and makes it very uncomfortable to read. The forces in the royal palace are also fascinated, as are all the forces. It feels like everyone is in a magical state of "I'm afraid of you but I just like to provoke you." For the sake of the author's previous works, I reluctantly finished the free chapters, but I feel that the current content is not enough to attract me to pay, so I say goodbye. Finally, I would like to wish the author a great success in his new book. I complained so much along the way, but the author never deleted it or scolded me. I have a good attitude and a stable mood. Thank you. I will come to support another new book, and hope to see a better story by then.

There are just a few guards, maids, servants, and a few retainers. The princess only has a maid. A wealthy family doesn't just take these people with them when they go out. All fools know that there is a problem. The emperor doesn't even want them to come back alive.

Turns out I'm not the only one who thinks the author has changed.

Why not follow the path of the melon-eating swordsman and go play with Jin Yong? Although Jin Yong has been written by many people, the author is still very capable. Based on the previous book, as long as the quality is similar, the results should be good.

This book is also about martial arts and is very different from the previous ones. First of all, although the swordsman is a martial arts, it is also an infinite flow. If you can't stand one story, you can read the second one. Let's talk about what attracted me to The Swordsman. The first dungeon, Xiao Li's Flying Knife, featured Lin Xian'er from the very beginning. I felt that this protagonist was very different. I've seen many Flying Knife fics, and even authors who like harems stayed away from Lin Xian'er. When I first started playing this game, I really wanted to see what the protagonist would do next. The second dungeon is a pair of peerless heroes. It is very rare that they dress up as Jiang Feng. As soon as I saw Jiang Feng, I knew that this dungeon must tell the story of the protagonist and Yao Yue Lianxing. I was also very interested in reading it. Unfortunately, it ended after I fell in love with the two palace masters. It felt like I landed right after taking off. The third one, Lu Xiaofeng, well, this story is the most useless. It has no attractive points, but it is also the longest. The fourth third young master's sword is very refreshing from the beginning, using Tianwai Feixian to pretend to be awesome. It is so cool that I will definitely watch it. The fifth Xiao Shisanlang starts with the most beautiful woman in the world. There is no need to say that. You can definitely watch it. In the end, Chu Liuxiang, who has experienced so many worlds, has long been invincible. It depends on how the protagonist pretends to be. The author is also very clever in making the protagonist happily pretend. I can't say, full marks. The Swordsman was pretty good except for the too-early ending. The author also said in the closing words that the protagonist is invincible and side-scrolling is meaningless. Well, everyone just likes to watch plots where side-scrolling shows off! ! ! After talking about the swordsman, let's talk about this book. I don't know why the author classifies the strength of martial arts. If you have already graded it, it's really not as good as writing a fairy tale fantasy. Obviously, I didn't grade the fairy tale before. Once your martial arts is leveled up, it's not enough to pretend to be awesome, because there are levels above you that can crush you. When I read martial arts, I often get tired of watching fairy tales and fantasy upgrading streams. Nowadays, the highlights of martial arts are either fan fiction or full-level promotions at the beginning, so new books really have few attractive points. If the level upgrading is made more enjoyable, then it is better to write fairy tales and fantasy. I can still pursue it now because I know the author and know that reading your book will not make any mistakes, but this book seems to have the advantage of not making mistakes. This is the first time that Khan has written so many words. I hope the author can have a good setting for his next story.

Is this world bigger than the rivers and lakes or the imperial court? The prince went out for a trip and came back and no one around him knew him. How could he successfully succeed to the throne? You always emphasize that having an army of 50,000 is awesome. Why don't you see the deterrent power of an army of 50,000 when someone comes to kill you? Are you really not considering rewriting this beginning?

While there are elixirs, you don't improve your skills, and you try your best to improve some useless junk martial arts, just to suppress the protagonist. It's really disgusting, and it's getting more and more boring.

This is as funny as if the leader of the Yuanying Sect died and passed the position of leader to his Qi-refining son before his death. Only when everyone is of similar strength can they have the right to inherit this thing. I can blow you to death with my breath, but I can also let you ride on my head to shit?

This is not the world of female porn. Where did the female champion come from in the feudal society? Moreover, how could the emperor be so confident that the protagonist would not escape his control, and he was not poisoned? So what if it was revealed that the protagonist was a fake prince? If he really wanted to rebel, who would care if the protagonist was real or fake? For the sake of his future, the fake one must be true.

What we are saying is that the emperor does not believe in the truth, and then he will let you live a fake past without feeding him poison or other controlling things. Will I marry you a female champion? Let's not study whether his female champion was searched. Why should his emperor trust this person who ran away from home after running away from marriage?

The first time I saw half of the first chapter, I ran away because the protagonist touched the heroine with his hands and you were not familiar with the relationship between colleagues. The second time I saw the third chapter, it is a series of martial arts and swordsmanship. There are indispensable descriptions of three ways later, and I was afraid of being cheated and ran away. The third time I saw Chapter 6 talking about the realm of swords delaying the enemy, I was chaoving that you can write it. If you can't write something original, don't let the protagonist pretend to compete. Moreover, I have written six or seven chapters to avoid being chased by poison. The crisis at the beginning is not as dangerous as yours. There is no new idea at all, and it is not exciting. The protagonist is still taking the blame. Who will do it if you don't pounce on it. For those who don't know, I think you wrote an abusive article.

It's hard to say that martial arts can be combined with the children of aristocratic families or with the children of wealthy businessmen, but combining them with the princes of the court is incompatible. The protagonist has no strength yet does not practice martial arts and is trying his best to develop the territory. Have you placed it in the wrong zone? And it's not a men's zone, so putting it in the women's zone doesn't feel out of place. I have no idea what I'm writing

Cologne eating melon is really cool, why didn't the author write about it?

Isn't this the position of a powerful prince who controls an army of fifty thousand? I think this is the most uncomfortable point. It's okay to look down on the protagonist just because he's a character. I can't remember how many times the protagonist has been looked down upon, and it's still an easy flow. In my opinion, some character authors who should be taught a lesson or even killed on the spot have gotten through it in a "easy flow" way. Go 🤔 Although most of the characters did not end well, it was very unpleasant I remember a woman named Nangong in particular. She looked down on the protagonist when they first met, and the protagonist didn't respond. The second time she took the initiative to find trouble with the protagonist, and the protagonist retaliated and slapped her right away? ? The protagonist blocked the fight for a while, and then it was over? ? Don't slap him back? I can't understand, is the relaxed flow originally a good-tempered flow? I can't imagine the scene of a prince with 50,000 troops being slapped by a young girl. Can you imagine it, author? This is the biggest dissatisfaction at the moment, because I remember that this is the only character who extremely offends the protagonist but does not suffer any loss and has a role later The protagonist does not look like a prince, he is top-notch A good-tempered persimmon, he puts his status too low. I think it is very inconsistent. Of course, I can see that the latest version has its advantages and the narrative is smooth. In addition, I read it on QQ Reading and specially ordered a review. I hope the author will write less descriptions of people in the world looking down on the protagonist. The protagonist should at least be as good as the master in terms of status, and then be looked down upon by some congenital people 🤔

Why do you have such a taste for female videos?

To be honest, The Melon-eating Swordsman was written very well, so why not just write it along the way?

This book is full of inexplicable awkwardness from beginning to end. The biggest conflict is between the army and Jianghu. The author keeps emphasizing that he has his own settings, but I don't see what he has set... When I read the subscription, I feel that it is a world view that is less than that of Zhongwu. But in the book, everyone in Jianghu has a sense of superiority as a cultivator! Other people in the martial arts world are the Doudou Jinyiwei who work for corrupt officials, but here they work directly with the border troops! I'm really speechless, Bianjun!

Originally I didn't like having a harem, and the lack of distinction between female supporting characters felt like a trophy, but yet another martial arts game was polluted by sequence 0. A harem is better than a cuckold.

Has this innate master become a cabbage? Now when you meet a woman, she is a congenital master

Well, I read three of them patiently, ah, I have a feeling about the author, are you selling it? As for whether the novel is well written or not, this is a question of ability. Whether you like it or not may also be a problem of the reader. This is normal. But after the first three cards, I found more than a dozen common sense loopholes. This is not like it was written by an old author. Well, let me ask the author, did you really sell your account to a certain studio?

Later, the main character's combat power started to be suppressed. It's disgusting. Run away.

Forget it if there are no women who have soul-transportation. There are many female protagonists who still engage in soul-transportation. The body is not your own body. If you think about it from your perspective, you have to truly have soul-transportation in the real world. It doesn't matter, but this is a novel. It must be fun. If you don't want some little poisonous points, don't.

Is "Eating Melon" the pinnacle?

At first glance, Wu Xia Jia Chao Tang was adapted for the TV series.

Author, let alone the three golden chapters, you have a sense of looking down on the readers in the first and second chapters! What is Li Daitao Zang? If you write about an illegitimate son of a prince who has never been seen before, and was replaced by the emperor on the way to retrieve the other heirs after they died, I will accept it. But you wrote that a proton was sent back by the emperor, all the guards were replaced, and the original person's parents and original person are still alive. Does the emperor who came up with this plan really have a halo of wisdom in his mind?

Are you really the author who wrote The Melon-eating Swordsman?

Which one do you think is more suitable

I couldn't hold it in any longer. Originally, Qidian was always recommending me novels with short, flat, quick titles and full of gimmicks, but this one at least has a smooth narrative. How come there are so many mindless superheroes in a martial arts commentary?

Apart from being short, I feel that this book has no shortcomings!

It's finally not a two-world novel. The author's modern novels are realistic. You can completely skip the modern ones.