Reborn, My Girlfriend Is Chen Dulin

Wenqing's disease is so severe that he can't see the main plot of the author's story, and he pretends to be a mysterious person... This routine is completely off-putting now. The main plot is unclear and the sub-plot is unclear. How can we do it? There are many missing words and many words that have not been corrected.

Hiding identity, literature and art, using homophones for names, being semi-empty, engaging in Jiang Wen-style dialogue at every turn. If you write like this, believe me, if you can't write 1 million words, you will definitely become a eunuch. Don't talk about you. Even if Jiang Wen himself comes, he will leave crying.

I can't stand it anymore. There's nothing wrong with the author trying to use the traffic and fans of the love letter to Amo, but you made up the hero and heroine in 2026 in 2015, and you started writing songs and singing, but you didn't end up working on a movie behind the scenes, and it just collapsed. You have good language skills, but there is something wrong with the concept and outline. Recommend rewriting.

I couldn't watch the movie when I saw it 😅 The more I watched it, the weirder it became. I wrote a song at the beginning but there was no follow-up? It has always revolved around that movie, and it also involves family background. Really literary enough

Cut it and rewrite it. After 14 years, it will be traffic play. You can't understand it by playing behind the scenes, because capital has already entered the market at that time. It is better to write about traffic and become top-notch with various endorsements and so on. If you want to play behind the scenes, I suggest you start playing in the early 20s.

Since you wrote it, I have to join in the fun.

Personally, I feel that this author always does some stupid things. He wrote this name obviously to gain popularity, but the person you want to gain popularity is real. As a result, you created a lot of false characters, which makes it uncomfortable to read sometimes real and sometimes fake. What's even more ridiculous is that I always want to engage in emotional kidnapping in a repetitive cycle. Once or twice is okay, but if it is too many, I will get bored. No common sense, no concept of time, okay, that's it, I won't be able to watch anymore.

Is this movie so urgent? It was filmed but not released or scheduled. When the big studios are pouring in their hot money, you want to counterattack by relying on word of mouth. Are you kidding? In those days, even bad movies would be pushed by the capital. It's funny! It's okay to make money first and then invest in love. It's so heart-wrenching for readers to read. The first few chapters were quite impressive, but why did it completely change after a few chapters?

I can't stand the writing at all. It's a literary youth's self-interested writing. If you don't have money, you're a coward. If you have money, you'll still be a coward.

I wish students who need to take the college entrance examination good luck 😁