Becoming a Martial Arts Immortal Through Daily Rewards

A government official establishment needs a trap and a dedicated government official, so why not find a trap that has no descendants? Aren't you afraid that other officials will be disappointed, and you won't make any mistakes in the future to save your life? The protagonist's father, a veteran, will try his best to explain that this way can give the protagonist a system. Is there any obvious conflict between the protagonist's father's system and the credit system? Later, they learned martial arts and became successful and organized. Why did the protagonist and his son work hard for it?

The protagonist of Awakening Su Hui is written like a mindless young man who traveled through time before graduating from high school. It is something that normal people can figure out. The protagonist just can't figure it out. He first contradicts his boss and then questions the drug dealer's son who has already taken the position as a yamen servant. Only after he has finished can he figure out what's going on. It's better to change it to the protagonist guessing what's going on. Because he has not figured out the function of the golden finger before he is recovering from his injuries, he chooses to endure it first, but The drug dealer's son got carried away and took the initiative to provoke him. First, the protagonist, in order to become a regular employee, actively participated in handling a major case, which resulted in the death of the yamen official's father and he was seriously injured. Then Su Hui awakened, went to the arrester to become a full-time employee, and then was targeted for not being allowed to become an employee. A discerning person could see that something was wrong. As a result, the protagonist, an ordinary white servant, dared to directly contradict the arrester. The plot of a common man who turns into a government official and immediately goes to question him is too retro and very poisonous for today's readers. If the drug dealer's son took the initiative to provoke him, it would still be acceptable. After all, an outsider with no foundation obviously only relied on sending money to join forces with the catcher to kill the protagonist. After taking office and the two yamen positions that competed after that, they were all in his own pocket. He felt that those families in the city did not exist. He was a brainless villain who was so complacent. If he was killed by the protagonist's father because of his previous deception and fake case, it would make sense for the son of the family to take the initiative to provoke the protagonist. It would be better than the current plot where he originally wanted to mess with the protagonist but the protagonist took the initiative to question him and was deliberately targeted.

It's better not to write about your EQ and IQ being so low, just go to the factory and screw them.

I can't stand half of the first chapter. Is this the awakening of past world wisdom? Even the idiots who refused to inherit could see that something was wrong and they were still stupid, talking a lot of nonsense.

In general, it's still some old routines. In addition, the special department of the imperial court called village guards is quite unique.

Update more, otherwise it will just disappear from everyone's eyes

People who have no brains can read this book

Although there is no golden finger in the first chapter, the current predicament of the protagonist is quickly sorted out, and the goal that the protagonist wants to strive for is immediately revealed. Very clear and fast. Green leaf supporting characters immediately appeared. This kind of supporting characters readers really hope that the protagonist can crush and feel proud. This increases the tension of the plot and attracts readers to continue reading. The golden finger appears in the third chapter, and the daily settlement of selling points is clearly stated, making readers look forward to new changes every day. But I personally think that every day is still too fast. It would be better if it was settled weekly, so that the ups and downs of the plot can be lengthened. Above

It's too hasty. Don't establish opposition so quickly at the beginning. Goodbye