After Three Years of Life, Immortality Begins with a Taoist Book

When I read the first chapter, I just felt that the writing and sentences were so stretched, and there were traces of hesitation between the lines.

What about writing literary works?

I just sold three bags and three spiritual stones, and I was about to die. I can understand that there will be great interests involved later, but after all, this is just the beginning, and it is very unconvincing. Only one person who can sell charms? Will we no longer be able to open trade routes? Why did I owe so much money before? Those who were able to go out risked their lives and had to prepare three more spirit stones to avoid beasts. They worked hard and spent money, which meant that the income from one trip was more than three spirit stones. Later, he cowered in fear of a spiritual stone. The economy looks very big.

The plot or background world view design is not quite right. It gives me the impression that it is not so much a low-level immortal cultivator in Fangshi, but a run-down small village. The three medicinal collectors were almost forced to death by rats and monsters at the gate of Fangshi and no one cares about it? How did this city get established?

What the evaluation asks is, are the characters in the work good? How do you feel about the plot? How is the writing? I'm just afraid that people won't know how to evaluate the book after reading it. Except for the beautiful cover of this novel, everything else is a disaster for me It is filled with a lot of dialogue, and all the characters have very little expression, demeanor, or movement description. This book has no characters There is no plot in this book I can't see any writing style in this book You may think what I said is too harsh, but you will understand after reading it This should be an AI novel without any rendering, served directly

It was written by AI. Cultivation of immortality does not follow logic. In such a world, even those who cultivate immortality cannot survive. Then are there still mortals? How could a high-level immortal cultivator come out without anyone?